All Comments on 'My Fair Mare'

Good story. Although an important part was left out. The story jumped from being outside to being in the barn without detailing how/when her hands got tied.

As mentioned a little action was forgotten, but not bad for your second story. I'll be reading more if there is more to read.

RS

You seem to have attained your objective: Rough, insensitive sex. I read this story immediately after reading another of your stories which projected sensitivity and caring. I rated the other one "5" though it was better than that.

This one I didn't like and didn't rate. You should write your stories as you wish. However, sensitivity and caring seems to bring out your best work.

Try proofreading your story before submitting it.