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Anonymousover 12 years agoUm, humor? Satire?
A girl calling a guy a pussy might be funny I guess...but not in the context of this story.
The actual story itself wasn't bad, just a bit rushed.
Aeroielover 12 years agoFunny & Kinky??
A Quote from your story.
"Dropping my keys in the bowel "...well it seems a little kinky to me.
No, I'm not the grammar/spelling police....this typo was just to good to pass up.
At least it it gave me a good chuckle & I like your story & other stories BTW.
Anonymous10 months agopresent tense makes this feel unnatural, from start to finish. Kept taking me out of the immersion, despite it being a very short story.
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