misspellings and changes of tense were too distracting. Edit your stuff more carefully.
I loved it and look forward to more of the same. I liked the flow, is this based on fact?
This was hot. I'd edit anytime. I'll certainly not criticize anonymously, either...
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misspellings and changes of tense were too distracting. Edit your stuff more carefully.
I loved it and look forward to more of the same. I liked the flow, is this based on fact?
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This was hot. I'd edit anytime. I'll certainly not criticize anonymously, either...
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