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Awesome!
Loving the series, keep going!
Hope to see more chapters soon. You have a really good story going and I hope you're able to keep it on track with more chapters.
I really like this series and how the characters aren't becoming mindless bimbos or crazy control freaks. Please continue!
I agree
Previous comments. I'd love to see another segment or two.
J
Another installment please
Hi
Just to say my wife and I just read all 5 parts of your story and loved it.
After part 1 we took it in turns to read it out while the other went down. The part about writing with your tongue on her clit made my wife cum. Loved that touch with her responses not really indicating one way or another if she knew what you wrote. Very dark. Very dirty. Very, very fucking sexy.
You are a great writer. Don't be mean and get writing another chapter. Stephanie and Nicole deserve it.
Jake & Sam
UH-OH
No Ch 6?????
Fantastic story
Can't wait fr the next chapter!
When is ch 6 coming?
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