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A Lady and the Student Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by jpalsgr01/17/12

The detail

The detail and firm steady paced progression is rare in such a tale, good job.

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by Andromeda701/18/12

Well done,very good. 5

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by Anonymous01/19/12

More?

I do hope to see you continue with this story. There are so many ways it can go.

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by mercianknight01/19/12

Beautifully paced first chapter

Love what you are doing and look forward to your next instalments.

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by Anonymous04/16/13

To vague

I only got through the first 8 paragraphs but I feel like the reasoning behind the hypnotism is vague and to spread apart. Being this was makes it hard to follow the story and makes one retrace their steps.

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by DesireeFox05/29/13

Oh that is scary

but so very hot, Though Mistress has had this one role play a bimbo.

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by Anonymous09/25/13

loved it!!

Very good story.

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by simplysimon01/12/16

love the story

Love this story. The pace is so teasing. I will read the second part tomorrow.

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