All Comments on 'A Mother's Tale'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Good story, there's plenty of hot Milf fucking to come yet!

playman64playman64over 12 years ago
Good story

I really enjoyed reading your story.

Steve

bartermanbartermanover 12 years ago
good start

a good start to a sexy story but it all happened so quick and was a bit short on description which is why a gave you a 3 but you're going on my favs list i look forward to reading more xx

LikeFineWine1LikeFineWine1over 12 years ago
Good start

You clearly enjoy the same stories as I do, so I am looking forward to more, however it felt a bit rushed. Don't be afraid to take your time and get into some detail. Keep it up.

bluewillybluebluewillyblueover 12 years ago
A great start!

Just a little fast for me but you are off to a great start, looking forward to chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice short story

Many young men desire friends mom's. It is a compliment a lot of women enjoy and tease. The right situation can make things happen.

2275jr2275jrabout 12 years ago
nothing better than a mature horny woman taking a young cock

a mothers tale . what a real hot horny story loved it . reading this was like watching it talking place right before my eyes , the writing was out standing so very exciting more parts i hope

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
person

try writing in the first person.....so much more fun to read

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