a good start to a sexy story but it all happened so quick and was a bit short on description which is why a gave you a 3 but you're going on my favs list i look forward to reading more xx
You clearly enjoy the same stories as I do, so I am looking forward to more, however it felt a bit rushed. Don't be afraid to take your time and get into some detail. Keep it up.
nothing better than a mature horny woman taking a young cock
a mothers tale . what a real hot horny story loved it . reading this was like watching it talking place right before my eyes , the writing was out standing so very exciting more parts i hope
by
Anonymous07/22/12
person
try writing in the first person.....so much more fun to read
English
Good story, there's plenty of hot Milf fucking to come yet!
Good story
I really enjoyed reading your story.
Steve
Good story.
good start
a good start to a sexy story but it all happened so quick and was a bit short on description which is why a gave you a 3 but you're going on my favs list i look forward to reading more xx
Good start
You clearly enjoy the same stories as I do, so I am looking forward to more, however it felt a bit rushed. Don't be afraid to take your time and get into some detail. Keep it up.
A great start!
Just a little fast for me but you are off to a great start, looking forward to chapter 2!
Nice short story
Many young men desire friends mom's. It is a compliment a lot of women enjoy and tease. The right situation can make things happen.
nothing better than a mature horny woman taking a young cock
a mothers tale . what a real hot horny story loved it . reading this was like watching it talking place right before my eyes , the writing was out standing so very exciting more parts i hope
person
try writing in the first person.....so much more fun to read
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Mother's Tale or
More submissions by DeeLishus.