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by Floridaryan01/18/12

No wonder

No wonder she's divorced. Just another slut

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by PaulHayabusa01/19/12

bigcarl796 Whats the point...

...to tell her son/his friend about it???
I know at last on case like that of friend fuck mom of another.And got ugly, very ugly.

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by michael195001/20/12

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This story seems like a guy bragging at a bar of his conquest. The descriptive interplay between the two protagonists however, is seemingly, very like the real life interactions I have experienced in my own 61 years. So it is shallow and deep in the same breath, interesting concept separating each stage of the seduction into islands of action and interplay, with each segment striking an individual serial like act. Reminds me of the old cinema reels. Short, blunt, fast paced action, conflict and resolution. Kinda fun.

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