You've got talent. Hope you'll write more, and fill out your biography a little bit more.
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Anonymous01/18/12
Very good
Can't wait to see more from you.
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Anonymous01/18/12
Hot
Good read very hot
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Anonymous01/19/12
I have no complaint about your narrative style. The eroticism is enjoyable to read and the level of plausibility is above standard. Some spell check and punctuation correction would be nice, though.
Loved it! Great story . You got me rock hard. You have a real talent. More, please! Can"t believe this is your first. I love stories that take the time to build up to the sex. And love it when there is some tenderness also.
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Anonymous03/08/15
WOW!
I love this story, Please write more. Ps I haven't sucked my first cock YET but would love to try.
English
Well written
You've got talent. Hope you'll write more, and fill out your biography a little bit more.
Very good
Can't wait to see more from you.
Hot
Good read very hot
I have no complaint about your narrative style. The eroticism is enjoyable to read and the level of plausibility is above standard. Some spell check and punctuation correction would be nice, though.
So, is there more to come?
Very good read, really enjoyed it :)
loved it!!!
that was an amazing story.....
i hope u continue this story i would cum and read it ;)
Cute story
I, for one, would love to see what happened on the rest of the trip!
Well done !
Loved it! Great story . You got me rock hard. You have a real talent. More, please! Can"t believe this is your first. I love stories that take the time to build up to the sex. And love it when there is some tenderness also.
WOW!
I love this story, Please write more. Ps I haven't sucked my first cock YET but would love to try.
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