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Wake Up Call

byQuietmahoganystorm©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/20/12

Beautiful

Yes Yes Yes!!, please keep exploring this story.

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by Decadentdessert01/20/12

I love both stories both just wonderful!

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by juicycaramel01/21/12

AWW :'o)

these characters r AWESOME!! their red hot passion is only surpassed by the true love they so obviously share! i wud LOVE 2 READ ANYTHING ABT THIS COUPLE...except a breakup ;o) JUST BEEAAUUTIFUL!!!

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Thanks for the feedback

Ok, so rehashing words from my first submission (anniversary) I may or may not continue Josephine & Jacob's story. I really like the love these two characters have for each other - they are a couple that's been together through careers, kids and life in general. I tried to show that through this update & hope I was successful at that. So far these two haven't said anything to me yet about a prequel, but I might if the fancy strikes me....

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by Anonymous01/22/12

Oh my gosh! I adsolutely LOVED your story. I was just "awwwing" through the whole thing. I'm still going awwww. :-)

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by Nightpleasure01/23/12

enjoyable story.

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by Madameblaque02/21/12

Beautiful story. Short, but sweet and to the point!!

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by Alpha_Marm03/08/12

lovely

***** and sweet.

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by THELOVELY1GLO04/01/12

SO

sweet and short, yet gets the point across of his undying love for his wife :>)

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