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by christinelouise1302/01/12

Left Hanging

Was left hanging there at the end. Though perhaps that was your intent. Will have to read chapter six to find out what happens next. Maybe next time make the end a little more dramatic so it's more of a cliff-hanger than a cliff-dangler. All in all, pretty good. Was interesting to read a little bit about Janet, but I'm not sure how it really goes with the rest of the story. Perhaps though, you'll reveal that in subsequent chapters. We shall see. Keep it up! Bravo!

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