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Anonymousabout 12 years agoI loved it!
I hope there will be more - lots more! Five stars and thanks for sharing - you have a real talent.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoA little editing would help
Interesting story, but really needs editing and proof reading by a human being not Word.
masteratplayabout 12 years agoAuthorThanks for the feedback
Its my first draft from a caffeine induced rush. A lot of grammatical mistakes, but that's how we learn I guess. I'll start boiling more coffee for the next chapter.
C_frommnabout 9 years agoNice Start
But cut way too short. It would be nice to have a follow-up on how everything got to the Opening scene. there was more then just the Remote.
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