The very end of this chapter is quite a zinger. I had to read the end a few times just to make sure I had read it right. I believe I know what will happen, but I am anxious to find out for myself if my theories prove true. Nice use of foreshadowing there by the way. I'm anxious for more chapters. Keep it up! Bravo!
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Interesting Twist
The very end of this chapter is quite a zinger. I had to read the end a few times just to make sure I had read it right. I believe I know what will happen, but I am anxious to find out for myself if my theories prove true. Nice use of foreshadowing there by the way. I'm anxious for more chapters. Keep it up! Bravo!
Brought back a few memories
I'm an IU alum, class of 72. This story reminded me of memories of the night life along Kirkwood Avenue. Too bad the Vonlee theatre is gone. Thanks.
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