however, you could sense her anxiety through your writing. More detail would have been better which would have lent to a longer piece. You obviously have more chapters in mind - dealing with the other workers due. Try not to keep your readers waiting too long lest they lose interest.
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A bit rushed . . .
however, you could sense her anxiety through your writing. More detail would have been better which would have lent to a longer piece. You obviously have more chapters in mind - dealing with the other workers due. Try not to keep your readers waiting too long lest they lose interest.
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Was the handyman mature male and Mrs Adams was young trophy wife or Mrs Adams was mature cougar and the handyman (Henry) was young beginner??????
another dim witted slut eager to lose it all
and I hope she get exactly what she deserves.
No Stars
How old are you - 12?
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