All Comments on 'The Golf Widow'

by TheChameleon

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alcopopalcopopover 12 years ago
Excitement.

Quite a good story apart from some spelling and grammar. It seemed the more excited you got with your submission, the worse your small errors. Try and get someone to proof-read your story before submission....but keep at it.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THE WIDOW DOESNT HAVE TO HAVE A DECEASED

to be included. TK U MLJ LV NV

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