a good start is there more to come?
You are aware you had your character strip twice right?
No, the bride and her bridesmade were only forced to watch everyone else strip, she only stripped once
Most of the time the surprise endings are given away way too early. This one kept it to the very end. Well developed and well written. I will look for your future stories.
Does Karen or someone else discover James’ treachery and get revenge?
There is nothing sexier than a forced orgasm!
James should experience forced sodomy and repeated unwanted physical stimulation!!!!
I know some don't like to hear it but
RAPE IS RAPE
That the "boys" saw nothing wrong with their actions does not speak well of their Class. And I use class in many ways because none of them have any class at all.
Great fantasy story. Amongst all of the various assaults there was no mention of anyone licking any of the womens assholes. What a shame. At least one of them should have had her asshole licked, sucked and tongue fucked.
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