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and the one sure way to repudiate. TK U MLJ LV NV

Your poem is mentioned in the recommendations thread in the Poetry Forum.

I think your poem is superb.

It captures your thoughts and

feelings, which surely is what

poetry needs to do?

It demonstrates your mood

is perhaps a better way of

putting it.

Thank you.

Thoughtful and sensitive; I like it

I can feel how you feel. That's what a poem is supposed to do...you got mad talent.

PS: I always have a difficult time to connect to other peoples feelings ...so that says a lot about your talent.

Very enjoyable, would love to read more.

heartfelt and touching

This touched me, as I find myself in the same space ...

made me lonely

so very touching and deep