Your opening has endless options..........great start
More please!!!!!
how do you say- decadent. No??? The only thing that bothered me was prostituting owns wife to the person lower by many class factor, for such short and minimal gain doesn't hold the "glue". Yes????
Excellent period piece. I am really looking forward to this one. Take you time to keep the rest at the same standard that this fine introduction.
Waiting for more !!!! ;)
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great start
Your opening has endless options..........great start
Excellent beginning!
More please!!!!!
Very....
how do you say- decadent. No??? The only thing that bothered me was prostituting owns wife to the person lower by many class factor, for such short and minimal gain doesn't hold the "glue". Yes????
Tremendous potential
Excellent period piece. I am really looking forward to this one. Take you time to keep the rest at the same standard that this fine introduction.
Waiting for more !!!! ;)
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