All Comments on 'Doctor Does Diesel Ch. 11'

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juicycarameljuicycaramelover 12 years ago
OH EM GEE!!

another great chapter! don't tell me carlos has HIV! hangin on 4 ur update!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
Ladies and gentlemen

This is when the OOOOOOOH SHIT Factor comes into play.

lili82lili82about 12 years ago
oooooh!

Carlos is Pete's lover! Don't do it, Carlos! Diesel will whoop that ass over his Maddy!

NightpleasureNightpleasureabout 12 years ago

This was such a great chapter, even though it was too short. I really cannot wait to see what's going to happen. Carlos has lost his mind over Pete. I hope that Carlos doesn't do anything stupid because he thinks Pete and Maddison is together. Please update ASAP. I just love the story.../

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Oh Boy !!!

Well it has finally happened. The chickens have come home to roost. LOL!

Pete is in for a world of hurt. I get the feeling that Hector/Carlos is going to destroy Pete's relationship with everyone he knows and love. More so I do believe that Hector/Carlos has HIV and may have deliberately given it to Pete!

He is definitely going to try and hurt Madison, BRING ON DIESEL!! LOL!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Tangle Web!!

I agree Carlos has gone LOCA!! over Pete. I don't think Pete really wants to go back to Madison, he probably just told Crazy Carlos that to get him off his back!! Poor Madison she'll be the one getting the brunt of it.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127about 12 years ago
Danger ahead

Why do I think Carlos knows who she is and she didn't get a good look at him while her ex Peter and Carlos were jumping on the good foot. Carlos like some bitches went there to get info and do some damage control. That's why he bolted when he saw the ring. He thought his love had already given he the engagement ring not thinking she found someone that fast. I don't like the way Carlos is going with this it sounds really dangerous

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great chapter

I have the feeling that Madison has gotten himself into one strange love triangle. It would be interesting if Pete was cheating and Carlos found out which would explain him storming out and Pete wanting to see Madison again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
oh hell

Carlos done went crazy!! I have this feeling that Carlos is talking about Peter..and Peter's ex is Madison...so now Carlos is gonna go nuts and try and kill them both * wipes brow* crazy!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
the shark

... has been jumped.

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueabout 12 years ago
I Hope That...

Madison doesn't get hurt. Thanks for the update!!!Great story

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2about 12 years ago
OMG

Ok Carlos is a real nutcase and poor Madison is about to walk into a trap I really wish she would've called and let Diesel know what was going on and where she was heading just in case he needed to come there and assist her with all the craziness I believe is about to hit the fan oh I can't wait to see what happens next I'm on pins and needles wondering what she's about to walk into please update again real soon I'm really enjoying this story thanks!!

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