Its just seemed a little bit rushed. Perhaps the author did that deliberately but It just seemed a little hard for me to relate to the characters.
It was a well thought out plot though
4 stars
by
Anonymous02/24/15
2 stars for me cause of the rape, specially with who performed
The problem with taking the high ground is some people are so self absorbed to feel justified in their actions. Not a good excuse for drugging and rape but some people don't get it any other way
it would be hard for me to call any of those guys friends
Their wives deserve to know too.
by
Anonymous06/12/15
The story was good, the rape was not revenge, using your friends.
Poor ending .i am sure the author could have figured a different angle to get his revenge.like hiring some bikers to take her and then photos of them doing her. The ex wife moves in with him ,marries him and is pregnant. So much for this fairy tail.8385
I have enjoyed almost every story of yours that I have read so far, But this one, just kept nagging at me. So an hour after reading this for the second time it finally hit me. The thing that was bothering me was that, although Joan got pretty much what she deserved with payback, her cohort didn't. Ray pretty much didn't get anything as close as what Joan got. That just seems wrong on a few levels. What her husband should have done in order to make it a bit more even, and have them share in the punishment was to have a few, either bi or gay males get good ole Ray in a guest bedroom and give him the same treatment. Oh yeah with pics for him to remember it by. You know have him getting both holes filled with big cocks. Not let him skate by without any form of retribution. Oh and as I said I have enjoyed most of your stories so far but this one was the best one of your stories so far good job oh wait GOOD JOB.
by
Anonymous11/08/15
I didn't go the BTB route
My wife and I were young, in love and ready to start having children. She had made a big production of throwing her pills away and said we were going to start, asap. At the time, we'd been married 31 months. We were 23 and 21, respectively when I caught her.
After her big production, on a Wednesday, she told me to wait until Saturday and we'd make love all day. It all sounded good to me, I wanted kids early on, the we would be alone while we were still young and be looking forward to our own grandbabies. I guess Susan had the same idea, however, she didn't care whose baby she had. Unfortunately, I had worked overtime the past few weeks and after doing so, could use that OT against Friday. I chose to go home after 3 hours and start my weekend off right, with my wife.
Living at the end of a country road, I was surprised to see an old car at our house, one I had only seen in HS. It belonged to an old boyfriend of my wife. They had went together through much of high school and he was the one to take her cherry and then bang her often in his old but cherry '66 Camaro. I couldn't understand why he would be at my house in the late morning.
I figured it out when I went into the house and didn't find anyone. Heading back to the bedroom, I found them both in bed sound asleep, I guess Susan and Tom had fucked themselves to sleep. The room was warm and they were on top of the blankets. Seeing my opportunity, I took a couple good cell phone pictures where the sperm leaking from her cunt was in your face evident and you could see them laying next to one another. Seeing his cock laying across his thigh, I saw what it was that interested my soon to be ex-wife, a fucking horse cock, even soft. I sent the pictures to my work computer and then went about packing. The room was summer bright and it took them a few minutes to wake up. By that time, I had the suitcase ready to zip closed.
Susan's scream alerted me to the fact she was awake. Tom shouted and I merely turned, with my razor sharp hunting knife in hand and gestured at the door. He tried to bluff me but when I took a step forward and slashed at his cock, he screamed like a girl and agreed to go. Susan was crying and pleading with me but I had her by the back of the neck, pushing her out into the front room along with Tom, both still naked. I handed her the suitcase and after opening the front door, I held Tom's ignition key in my hand for him and pushed them out the door, locking it behind them.
When Susan's father called, incensed at how I treated his daughter, I told him to check his computer, I had sent him a couple pictures from earlier in the day. He didn't hang up and in the background, I could hear Susan screaming and him shouting at her. He picked the phone back up, said he was sorry and ended the call.
The house was a graduation gift from my grandfather. Grandma had died young and he wanted to head for Florida. Rather than sell the house in the depressed market of the time, he signed it over to me and wished me good luck. Other than the home, we had little that was the two of ours. Taking the photos to a lawyer, I was divorced 4 months later with my ex pleading with me to just talk with her. At our signing, I told her the sperm leaking out from between her lips was all the information I needed from her. She sobbed and did her best to tell me she loved me and only me and would wait for me as long as it took. I laughed and said if she did that, she would never had children with anyone.
Susan and Tom had split up in high school because he cheated on her with some of their classmates. When she confronted him, he hit her hard enough to damage her orbital eye socket and she needed it repaired surgically. It was why I could never understand why she fucked him in MY bed. Before leaving my lawyers office, I suggested she marry Tom and that way they would have the best of one another, two cheaters in the same boat.
I guess she took me up on my idea. A month after our divorce was final, she had a courthouse marriage. Four months later, she gave birth to Tom's kid. I thought it was fitting, by then she was alone, Tom had cheated on her weeks after they married and had punched her, almost making her lose the baby. He had skipped town with a warrant out for his arrest. The fucking nigger. I never understood why they love blond women so much.
Susan and I never came into contact until about four years later when she was sitting on my front porch, our old house, when I came home from work. She looked good, but then, she always looked good. She had her little halfrican with her and although she was a good looking little thing, I told Susan to leave, we had nothing to say to one another. She left, but began showing up on my front porch every Saturday morning with Tom's spawn. Finally I had enough and let her in, in the hopes she would get it out of her system and leave me the hell alone.
Her story was that was the only time they fucked, he had come to the house that day with a handful of pictures he'd taken when they used to fuck. He threatened to show them to me if she wouldn't give him a little lovin' (yeah, that sounded like the fucker) and she gave in when he promised just the once. When she realized she was pregnant, she kept the baby in the hopes we could get back together, even while married to Tom and fucking him every night. When she was done, she looked pitiful and asked if I could find a way in my heart to forgive and give her another chance. About that time, my new wife walked out into the kitchen where we sat and I introduced her to Susan. Still half asleep, Lia shook her hand and then kissed me and asked what was for breakfast.
Susan left me alone after that. I heard after she left town, she moved in with Tom again, I guess she couldn't stay away from the horsecock hung nigger. Me? I have three boys now, and Lia and I both love them dearly. They are in high school and my wife and I are about to retire, at the rip old ages of 44 and 45. Life is good, even without real revenge. My great life is revenge enough.
some anons are so talented, they leave a good story in the comments, hot damn.
any ways, good job both of you DGH & the below anon( most probably a asst writer of quentin tarantino, why? may be because i just watched THE HATEFUL 8, or may be anons use of the derogatory name for a black person would more likely convince me)
- Joan wanted the security of her marriage but also the sex with her lover. (She actually didn't want the bigger dick? Stunning!
- Of course Sue and Alex ended up together. That's the way it goes in these fairy tale stories.
- Too bad Joan didn't end up with triplets,two black of course,and a baby turd that looked just like Ray.
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Anonymous03/20/16
Alex Was For Status; Ray Was For Sex
Joan most assuredly preferred sex with Ray. But she didn't want to jetison Alex. Another case of a woman wanting one man for financial security, stability, and status; but not willing to give up her sexual fun with her married lover. Fantastic revenge story.
by
Anonymous05/09/16
The Kid
Ray told Joan that Sue got pregnant. He married Sue. What happened to the kid?
by
Anonymous05/24/16
Miscarrage
At the begining of the story, it said she had a miscarrage shortly after they were married...
by
Anonymous05/26/16
Rape up until a few years ago was punishable by death! ! it's never justifiable!
and all the assholes like huedoog who think it's fine and the Neanderthals of his ilk are the reason why the U.S. Courts have gone so overboard to favor the woman in divorce. This story and the rabid favorable, salivating response by so many would be rapists are the reason American society is so anti-male now. Men are bigger, stronger, historically trained by society to be aggressive, and so the overreaction to this is the femanazis run amuck! That's why the courts and the cops take the woman's word for it when she says hubby hit or beat her! Because historically, a woman is far more likely to be battered or murdered by her husband than a stranger! Keep it up, you idiots, you're going get someone like hilary or bernie elected, and then we will not only have universal gun confiscation, but mandatory castration for all rapists, which they will define as everyone with a scrotum! They will harvest the sperm from all our balls and the political elite women who want kids will be artificially inseminated, choosing the donor from a list they'll keep of desirable genes, and the "donor"' will be compelled to pay child support and "mother support"' for the next 18 years! (Google "Kindergeld"--Germany's socialist policies for over 40 years have had the taxpayers supporting everyone else's kid--hilary or bernie would love to make just the males have to do this!)
Behave like a mensch, not an ass and if enough of you do, maybe things will change in our favor!
Not rated since, I can't give the author, whom I normally enjoy, a negative 10 stars .
Ok,i didn't like the story either,it's way over the top,it's even way passt BTB,it's moraly disgusting,you don't like what your wife is doing ? fine divorce her but having her rape gangbanged ? there were no kids involved so ......
But then my anonymous friend you got politics involved in your comment,this not the place for this
You don't like the democrats ? ok if you think living in a Trump world will be so much better that is your right
Kindergeld is not only a social law in Germany but allso in the whole of western Europe,it is payable to any parent who has custody over the children AND it is ment for the children not for the father,the all of not cheating wife but ONLY for the children,if it is abused or used for other purposes it can be revoked,just for your information
Typical that a fascist idiot like this would hide behind anonymity. Every word drips of life failure, particularly with women. The story is terrible, most would agree, but this comment is far worse.
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Anonymous06/10/16
1 fucking star. If I could only give a negative 10...
Nice fucking story promoting rape!!!
All the men in this story are fucking rapists!!!
I'm a man that was raped as a kid and both my sisters and mother were raped in front of me.
Fuck you!!!
If you want to write about rape, be real! People that rape are not good people!
People that get raped are not just fine later!
Joan would have more than likely developed PTSD and severe depression and been a suicide risk.
and as such, it was good. I don't really thinks there are many people that actually want to be raped, or even fantasize about it, but sure as shit there are some. I don't know why he went with the plan he had, but he did. He could have gone off the deep end and killed them, maybe justifiably, maybe not, but he didn't. The story showed that not all people react the same way we, or I would, we're all different. The story didn't reflect his emotional stance that well, or how he was thinking, or very much at all. I personally don't condone rape, and I'm sure it wouldn't be considered rape, when ray fucked her, at least by her, after all he was her lover.
I've always been a proponent of the "let the victim decide the punishment" line of thought, and this was his.
I also think some of your anon's commenters have some serious mental issues, and really should seek help.
by
Anonymous07/27/16
Wrong in so many ways
Then on top of everything else you decide what is culturally correct for black people? Suck a dick.
by
Anonymous08/17/16
Friends for the using
While your story started out nice, it did lacked some to be desired. It doesn´t say much about the characters just that she cheated and he got revenge. The real turn off was the inclusion of blacks. And two at that. Why? Please tell.! Why does most every new writer lacks the sense to lay out a script of their own without having to go to the old standby of trying to use race, to add to fill in some blanks.? Just surprised you didn´t use no ten inch black cock. ? Again why? Why can´t it be a friend, a guy, a man or a stranger? Well like I said would have been a great story till you decided ti take a short cut
by
Anonymous09/20/16
DG Hear has a reputation
I have no idea how he got it. He writes characters that talk like robots and he's a racist asshole.
by
Anonymous11/17/16
good one to get back at her for cheating
pay back is a bitch and she got it in spades....though you have to wonder had she ever fought the divorce how would the video stand up as evidence or be used against them as rape......and why did he not drop the others in the mire too....but he did end up happily with Sue....a strange concept of payback but a good idea.......
by
Anonymous12/22/16
karma for serial cheating wife-TRUE STORY
LOG INTO FACEBOOK. FIND PROFILE OF dearbornmt@yahoo.com. tattooed and breast implanted 50ish grandmother whose lost her job as college writing instructor in Helena Montana. Administrator at that 2 year college received Facebook info and photo of instructor cupping her bared breasts. Scar above her right breast is clearly evident
She had harassed and coerced one of her students, but he was just one of numerous affairs
She had recounted her sexual history to student and her wrote it all down in a journal. At time she started chasing after student simply because of his muscular arms she was involved with two other married men and still in close contact with two of her former lovers
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Anonymous01/05/17
Ha! Good story, good revenge...
I was less than thrilled about the drugs and rape, but I'll let it go since this is just a story. Some complained about the black guys being there, but I'm not sure why. You handled it tastefully, or at least as much as can be in a story like this; there wasn't anything racist about it that I noticed, it just so happens that a couple of the protagonist's friends were black. So what? It's not like Alex went out and hired them to do it, it's not like they broke in and demanded it, and it wasn't presented as if it was the ultimate punishment for his white wife. Some people are never happy unless they're running someone else down. Good job with the story. Thanks.
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Anonymous01/23/17
WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
When Alex says he feels sorry for Sue and her getting hurt because this was all his fault, what did you mean by that? I thought Ray and Joan were fucking and the shit hit the fan as a result of the infidelity. How does that become Alex's fault?
I'm not sure I get having all the friends fuck her makes sense but I think he should have taken a very aggressive shot up her ass, not just getting the head in while she was drugged but while she's trying to be extra nice to him burying himself balls deep and seeing just what Ray was experiencing.
English
It was a good story
Its just seemed a little bit rushed. Perhaps the author did that deliberately but It just seemed a little hard for me to relate to the characters.
It was a well thought out plot though
4 stars
2 stars for me cause of the rape, specially with who performed
not gooed tale 4 me
***
high ground
The problem with taking the high ground is some people are so self absorbed to feel justified in their actions. Not a good excuse for drugging and rape but some people don't get it any other way
it would be hard for me to call any of those guys friends
Their wives deserve to know too.
The story was good, the rape was not revenge, using your friends.
Poor ending .i am sure the author could have figured a different angle to get his revenge.like hiring some bikers to take her and then photos of them doing her. The ex wife moves in with him ,marries him and is pregnant. So much for this fairy tail.8385
WHEN YOU SNOOZE YOU LOSE
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Yay
Fucking skank jerkoff cheaters. They have to be the most stupid people who ever lived. They deserve to be alone, broke and broken. In pain also.
Ha
I came back
I have enjoyed almost every story of yours that I have read so far, But this one, just kept nagging at me. So an hour after reading this for the second time it finally hit me. The thing that was bothering me was that, although Joan got pretty much what she deserved with payback, her cohort didn't. Ray pretty much didn't get anything as close as what Joan got. That just seems wrong on a few levels. What her husband should have done in order to make it a bit more even, and have them share in the punishment was to have a few, either bi or gay males get good ole Ray in a guest bedroom and give him the same treatment. Oh yeah with pics for him to remember it by. You know have him getting both holes filled with big cocks. Not let him skate by without any form of retribution. Oh and as I said I have enjoyed most of your stories so far but this one was the best one of your stories so far good job oh wait GOOD JOB.
I didn't go the BTB route
My wife and I were young, in love and ready to start having children. She had made a big production of throwing her pills away and said we were going to start, asap. At the time, we'd been married 31 months. We were 23 and 21, respectively when I caught her.
After her big production, on a Wednesday, she told me to wait until Saturday and we'd make love all day. It all sounded good to me, I wanted kids early on, the we would be alone while we were still young and be looking forward to our own grandbabies. I guess Susan had the same idea, however, she didn't care whose baby she had. Unfortunately, I had worked overtime the past few weeks and after doing so, could use that OT against Friday. I chose to go home after 3 hours and start my weekend off right, with my wife.
Living at the end of a country road, I was surprised to see an old car at our house, one I had only seen in HS. It belonged to an old boyfriend of my wife. They had went together through much of high school and he was the one to take her cherry and then bang her often in his old but cherry '66 Camaro. I couldn't understand why he would be at my house in the late morning.
I figured it out when I went into the house and didn't find anyone. Heading back to the bedroom, I found them both in bed sound asleep, I guess Susan and Tom had fucked themselves to sleep. The room was warm and they were on top of the blankets. Seeing my opportunity, I took a couple good cell phone pictures where the sperm leaking from her cunt was in your face evident and you could see them laying next to one another. Seeing his cock laying across his thigh, I saw what it was that interested my soon to be ex-wife, a fucking horse cock, even soft. I sent the pictures to my work computer and then went about packing. The room was summer bright and it took them a few minutes to wake up. By that time, I had the suitcase ready to zip closed.
Susan's scream alerted me to the fact she was awake. Tom shouted and I merely turned, with my razor sharp hunting knife in hand and gestured at the door. He tried to bluff me but when I took a step forward and slashed at his cock, he screamed like a girl and agreed to go. Susan was crying and pleading with me but I had her by the back of the neck, pushing her out into the front room along with Tom, both still naked. I handed her the suitcase and after opening the front door, I held Tom's ignition key in my hand for him and pushed them out the door, locking it behind them.
When Susan's father called, incensed at how I treated his daughter, I told him to check his computer, I had sent him a couple pictures from earlier in the day. He didn't hang up and in the background, I could hear Susan screaming and him shouting at her. He picked the phone back up, said he was sorry and ended the call.
The house was a graduation gift from my grandfather. Grandma had died young and he wanted to head for Florida. Rather than sell the house in the depressed market of the time, he signed it over to me and wished me good luck. Other than the home, we had little that was the two of ours. Taking the photos to a lawyer, I was divorced 4 months later with my ex pleading with me to just talk with her. At our signing, I told her the sperm leaking out from between her lips was all the information I needed from her. She sobbed and did her best to tell me she loved me and only me and would wait for me as long as it took. I laughed and said if she did that, she would never had children with anyone.
Susan and Tom had split up in high school because he cheated on her with some of their classmates. When she confronted him, he hit her hard enough to damage her orbital eye socket and she needed it repaired surgically. It was why I could never understand why she fucked him in MY bed. Before leaving my lawyers office, I suggested she marry Tom and that way they would have the best of one another, two cheaters in the same boat.
I guess she took me up on my idea. A month after our divorce was final, she had a courthouse marriage. Four months later, she gave birth to Tom's kid. I thought it was fitting, by then she was alone, Tom had cheated on her weeks after they married and had punched her, almost making her lose the baby. He had skipped town with a warrant out for his arrest. The fucking nigger. I never understood why they love blond women so much.
Susan and I never came into contact until about four years later when she was sitting on my front porch, our old house, when I came home from work. She looked good, but then, she always looked good. She had her little halfrican with her and although she was a good looking little thing, I told Susan to leave, we had nothing to say to one another. She left, but began showing up on my front porch every Saturday morning with Tom's spawn. Finally I had enough and let her in, in the hopes she would get it out of her system and leave me the hell alone.
Her story was that was the only time they fucked, he had come to the house that day with a handful of pictures he'd taken when they used to fuck. He threatened to show them to me if she wouldn't give him a little lovin' (yeah, that sounded like the fucker) and she gave in when he promised just the once. When she realized she was pregnant, she kept the baby in the hopes we could get back together, even while married to Tom and fucking him every night. When she was done, she looked pitiful and asked if I could find a way in my heart to forgive and give her another chance. About that time, my new wife walked out into the kitchen where we sat and I introduced her to Susan. Still half asleep, Lia shook her hand and then kissed me and asked what was for breakfast.
Susan left me alone after that. I heard after she left town, she moved in with Tom again, I guess she couldn't stay away from the horsecock hung nigger. Me? I have three boys now, and Lia and I both love them dearly. They are in high school and my wife and I are about to retire, at the rip old ages of 44 and 45. Life is good, even without real revenge. My great life is revenge enough.
holy Fuck... INception in the coments Section
some anons are so talented, they leave a good story in the comments, hot damn.
any ways, good job both of you DGH & the below anon( most probably a asst writer of quentin tarantino, why? may be because i just watched THE HATEFUL 8, or may be anons use of the derogatory name for a black person would more likely convince me)
Keep on writing....
Cheaters Get What They Deserve!
- Joan wanted the security of her marriage but also the sex with her lover. (She actually didn't want the bigger dick? Stunning!
- Of course Sue and Alex ended up together. That's the way it goes in these fairy tale stories.
- Too bad Joan didn't end up with triplets,two black of course,and a baby turd that looked just like Ray.
Alex Was For Status; Ray Was For Sex
Joan most assuredly preferred sex with Ray. But she didn't want to jetison Alex. Another case of a woman wanting one man for financial security, stability, and status; but not willing to give up her sexual fun with her married lover. Fantastic revenge story.
The Kid
Ray told Joan that Sue got pregnant. He married Sue. What happened to the kid?
Miscarrage
At the begining of the story, it said she had a miscarrage shortly after they were married...
Rape up until a few years ago was punishable by death! ! it's never justifiable!
and all the assholes like huedoog who think it's fine and the Neanderthals of his ilk are the reason why the U.S. Courts have gone so overboard to favor the woman in divorce. This story and the rabid favorable, salivating response by so many would be rapists are the reason American society is so anti-male now. Men are bigger, stronger, historically trained by society to be aggressive, and so the overreaction to this is the femanazis run amuck! That's why the courts and the cops take the woman's word for it when she says hubby hit or beat her! Because historically, a woman is far more likely to be battered or murdered by her husband than a stranger! Keep it up, you idiots, you're going get someone like hilary or bernie elected, and then we will not only have universal gun confiscation, but mandatory castration for all rapists, which they will define as everyone with a scrotum! They will harvest the sperm from all our balls and the political elite women who want kids will be artificially inseminated, choosing the donor from a list they'll keep of desirable genes, and the "donor"' will be compelled to pay child support and "mother support"' for the next 18 years! (Google "Kindergeld"--Germany's socialist policies for over 40 years have had the taxpayers supporting everyone else's kid--hilary or bernie would love to make just the males have to do this!)
Behave like a mensch, not an ass and if enough of you do, maybe things will change in our favor!
Not rated since, I can't give the author, whom I normally enjoy, a negative 10 stars .
@Anonymous 05/26/16
Ok,i didn't like the story either,it's way over the top,it's even way passt BTB,it's moraly disgusting,you don't like what your wife is doing ? fine divorce her but having her rape gangbanged ? there were no kids involved so ......
But then my anonymous friend you got politics involved in your comment,this not the place for this
You don't like the democrats ? ok if you think living in a Trump world will be so much better that is your right
Kindergeld is not only a social law in Germany but allso in the whole of western Europe,it is payable to any parent who has custody over the children AND it is ment for the children not for the father,the all of not cheating wife but ONLY for the children,if it is abused or used for other purposes it can be revoked,just for your information
Ugly
This must be one of your worst stories. Most are very good, many are about stupid ass-holes but this one really doesn't merit one star.
Annon @ 5/26/16
Typical that a fascist idiot like this would hide behind anonymity. Every word drips of life failure, particularly with women. The story is terrible, most would agree, but this comment is far worse.
1 fucking star. If I could only give a negative 10...
Nice fucking story promoting rape!!!
All the men in this story are fucking rapists!!!
I'm a man that was raped as a kid and both my sisters and mother were raped in front of me.
Fuck you!!!
If you want to write about rape, be real! People that rape are not good people!
People that get raped are not just fine later!
Joan would have more than likely developed PTSD and severe depression and been a suicide risk.
Again.
Fuck you!!!
good story
and as such, it was good. I don't really thinks there are many people that actually want to be raped, or even fantasize about it, but sure as shit there are some. I don't know why he went with the plan he had, but he did. He could have gone off the deep end and killed them, maybe justifiably, maybe not, but he didn't. The story showed that not all people react the same way we, or I would, we're all different. The story didn't reflect his emotional stance that well, or how he was thinking, or very much at all. I personally don't condone rape, and I'm sure it wouldn't be considered rape, when ray fucked her, at least by her, after all he was her lover.
I've always been a proponent of the "let the victim decide the punishment" line of thought, and this was his.
I also think some of your anon's commenters have some serious mental issues, and really should seek help.
Wrong in so many ways
Then on top of everything else you decide what is culturally correct for black people? Suck a dick.
Friends for the using
While your story started out nice, it did lacked some to be desired. It doesn´t say much about the characters just that she cheated and he got revenge. The real turn off was the inclusion of blacks. And two at that. Why? Please tell.! Why does most every new writer lacks the sense to lay out a script of their own without having to go to the old standby of trying to use race, to add to fill in some blanks.? Just surprised you didn´t use no ten inch black cock. ? Again why? Why can´t it be a friend, a guy, a man or a stranger? Well like I said would have been a great story till you decided ti take a short cut
DG Hear has a reputation
I have no idea how he got it. He writes characters that talk like robots and he's a racist asshole.
good one to get back at her for cheating
pay back is a bitch and she got it in spades....though you have to wonder had she ever fought the divorce how would the video stand up as evidence or be used against them as rape......and why did he not drop the others in the mire too....but he did end up happily with Sue....a strange concept of payback but a good idea.......
karma for serial cheating wife-TRUE STORY
LOG INTO FACEBOOK. FIND PROFILE OF dearbornmt@yahoo.com. tattooed and breast implanted 50ish grandmother whose lost her job as college writing instructor in Helena Montana. Administrator at that 2 year college received Facebook info and photo of instructor cupping her bared breasts. Scar above her right breast is clearly evident
She had harassed and coerced one of her students, but he was just one of numerous affairs
She had recounted her sexual history to student and her wrote it all down in a journal. At time she started chasing after student simply because of his muscular arms she was involved with two other married men and still in close contact with two of her former lovers
Ha! Good story, good revenge...
I was less than thrilled about the drugs and rape, but I'll let it go since this is just a story. Some complained about the black guys being there, but I'm not sure why. You handled it tastefully, or at least as much as can be in a story like this; there wasn't anything racist about it that I noticed, it just so happens that a couple of the protagonist's friends were black. So what? It's not like Alex went out and hired them to do it, it's not like they broke in and demanded it, and it wasn't presented as if it was the ultimate punishment for his white wife. Some people are never happy unless they're running someone else down. Good job with the story. Thanks.
WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
When Alex says he feels sorry for Sue and her getting hurt because this was all his fault, what did you mean by that? I thought Ray and Joan were fucking and the shit hit the fan as a result of the infidelity. How does that become Alex's fault?
I'm not sure I get having all the friends fuck her makes sense but I think he should have taken a very aggressive shot up her ass, not just getting the head in while she was drugged but while she's trying to be extra nice to him burying himself balls deep and seeing just what Ray was experiencing.
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