You've done lots better, but this one is crap. The writing's too choppy, the characters are unsympathetic, and setting up a gang rape as revenge is just plain horrid.
this was to short, you need to fuck the slut over some more. What gang rape Gravyrug, you can't rape a lying whore. She was just a little tired and besides her true love held open her legs and fucked her to. *****5 stars plus*****
While I appreciate the plan for a revenge that would forever poison the relationship between Ray and Joan (which seemed to be the central premise of the story), I just couldn't get over the fact that hubby had his wife gang-raped. I don't think killing or raping are ever acceptable methods of revenge against for cheating. Especially, as here, when it is so cold-blooded and the result of sober planning. It also stretched the bounds of credibility that the guys would all just go along with it.
The recordings actually should have made things easier for hubby-to hear that wife is in love with another man (rather than you) is easier in some ways than hearing that she loves you, but is betraying you for whatever reason-it gives you the closure you need to move on.
Well-written, and a clever idea to poison the love that has ruined your marriage, but I just couldn't get over the rape and the amount of suspension of disbelief required.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Thank you
Hey..... another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one. The world is full of critics..... but who cares what they think. Please keep writing. Thank you.
I liked this story alot. Joan never really loved her husband. He was just a paycheck with a dick. The world is full of bitches just like her.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Ok story
Story was ok , but the ending to me was weak .
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Anonymous01/25/12
Gravy was right.
Our hero arranged a gang rape of his wife. He screwed her after four other guys had her. He talked his friends into cheating on their wives. He secretly filmed them doing it. With friends like him, no one needs any enemies.
I read stories that have four star ratings because they usually are the best. This one, however, is just plain disgusting. How can anyone rate this four and five stars unless the readers are perverts that enjoy having a guy set up a gang rape of his wife. He deserves jail time instead of sympathy.
Well, at least I can say I found no technical problems with the writing.
Ain't Nothing Like A Gangbang A Cheating Wife Story To Blow Away the Blues
" She was smiling/ thru her tears/ for 150 years ..." - Alex Harvey . That song actually got radio play 30 some years ago not likely today eh ? The story was pretty rote with nary a shred of novelty but it was amusing urban legend telling. 4****.
The wife in this story earned and enjoyed her treatment on the card playing evening. Husband was correct - if she had simply asked for a divorce, he would have given her one.
Normally, DGH's stories are not like that. I've read far better stories posted by him. Gang-rape is not a way to deal with a cheating wife!
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Anonymous01/25/12
Readers reactions are interesting
Well written story with a solid premise.
I'm somewhat surprised by some of the comments about the morality of using rape as a means for revenge. I don't want to sound like an apologist for rape because in REAL LIFE it is, in all cases, immoral. But I admit that the rape element in this story did not outrage me. Honestly I thought the scheme was quite elegant on many levels.
I just find it interesting that I've read similar revenge stories on this site, where wives have been bred with dogs, left naked in an inner-city crack house, or surreptitiously sent to Latin American brothels with nary a comment on the morality of the revenge.
Technically, there is no doubt rape occurred. This is a FICTIONAL story. In this STORY, the only people clearly 'hurt' by this incident were Joan and Ray, and that 'hurt' was to screw up their future relationship. # Tough...they were both involved in callously and deliberately screwing up our protagonist's life! I think this is cleverly conceived FICTION (& the author COULD have arranged the timing and circumstances to leave her pregnant with a mixed-race bonus in this STORY!)! DGH did NOT advocate for gang-rape as a general act.
# balancing that 'hurt' we have three counts of satisfying long-term fantasies, plus a back-door bonus for hubby...heck, even a farewell shot for Ray! Excellent trade-off in my opinion!
5*
I can't speak for everyone here. DG is a writer I respect and he seems to have a sense of morality. This is not something he normally writes and is a bit simple for his normal work.
Those other writers, I frequently don't comment on at all. One guy had a woman trapped in a cage in the desert. (Shakes head) As one of the writers here said: "How can you hold other people in contempt if you behave as contemptibly?" (paraphrase) She cheated. He was not exactly a moral beacon.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Bad
The "hero" should get about 20 some odd years to think about it.
If you are done with someone, just leave them, but crap like a rape is disgusting
Liked it. Revenge is sweet. She chose to cheat, not him. She conspired with his so called friend. She got off easy. Good Tale DG!! No wimp Zone! Need wimp cuckold catagory.
Loved the slow build up and drama...then thoroughly enjoyed the extreme revenge...then the soft coda. Well written, well paced and well plotted. Thank you for entertaining me with your literary talents DG Hear.
So all you guys think this was a just and fair reitribution. I guess I'm just a wimp ass cuck and all the other names you losers usually throw out because I think no one no matter what they did deserves to get drugged and gang raped. Those pesky morals of mine getting in the way again.
What about the fact that all of his friends were married to women he knew, guess that's just a minor thing if rapes ok in your screwed up mind.
I wonder if all you guys would screaming hell yea if we flipped this around and a cheated on wife got together 5 girlfriends with strap on's to fuck the cheaters ass bloody. Maybe you closet woman hating homo's would prefer him waking up covered in cum bleeding from his ass after the wife let him be queen for a night.
I just finished reading chocolate covered cherries and hometown hero and I'm very disappointed in DGhear with this one. It at best belonged in Nonconsent as it featured a rape.
A Cruel Revenge Story (CRS). For me the gang bang with drugged woman is not my taste, but a happy ending epiloge compenzated this. My question remains If DG Hear can write wrong story??????
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Anonymous01/25/12
Sub-standard, to say the least
Definitely not up to DGH's normally high standards. He went for the cheap over-the-top revenge rather than finding a better way to satisfy his need for retribution. And involving his friends in adultery was tacky and not the mark of someone with high character. Finally, the hook-up with Sue was a contrived happily-ever-after solution that did not ring true. Alex basically ran off and left her to clean up the mess he created by his very public exposure of his wife and her husband, yet she was able to get past that and make him her new husband. Not realistic. This author has done much better, but then you can't hit a homer every time at the plate.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Did not care for
the kidnapping and rape, but the rest of the story was very good. 3*
I usually like almost anything from DG Hear but this one doesn't do it for me. I guess I must be a WACC or whatever but even a lying slut can say "no" and if she does, it's rape. He didn't do his friends any favors either. Here he is, all put out about the fact his wife is screwing around, and what does he do? He convinces people who are supposed to be his friends to screw around on their wives. Not only that but he drops a pile of manure on the woman for whom he is supposed to have some feelings and then vanishes leaving her to deal with the aftermath alone. Sue must be a masochist otherwise she would be staying well clear of this guy.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Have always loved DG but didnt love this one.Rob conner is right. cheaters dont prosper. one partner came to know the other was cheating, gang rape was not needed. payback is a bitch.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Weak premise
I am a fan of DGH but not this story. First, I never connected with anyone in it. Next, the rape setup was too pat for me. There is a HUGE difference between wanting to screw a beautiful woman and raping her. Getting all his friends to agree, especially after Ray voiced his objections, is about zero.
Why would Ray first object then participate? Just because he was horny?
Next, when Joan woke up, she suspected immediately that something was wrong. What if she went to the hospital for a rape test. Also, people talk, there is a saying that they only way to keep a secret is with a conspiracy of one. Ray blabs and everyone else's marriage is on the line. Drunk or not, the odds of everyone agreeing and then keeping quiet are minimal.
Ttom
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Anonymous01/25/12
Lovvvved it
Lovvvvvved it
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Anonymous01/25/12
DG 10 stars fa ya.
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Anonymous01/25/12
HOT.DG u wrote this well. could have been in non consent/reluctance. Give us next story with a rape fuck by at least ten guys. would be hot sex.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Good rape story. Can you write BDSM too.Please write some good BDSM.
Was over the top to me,it was making the punishment fit worse then the crime. His buds were no better and ray was a piece of crap too,he didn't try to stop them or call the cops. No one is blameless except due,the wife may have loved ray but she wanted to stay because hubby was so good to her.He could have found ways to humiliate them both without the rape,shown the pictures to friends and family,made their lives hell.
But the protagonist is as bad as his wife and socalled friend in terms of actions.
There were a lot of clever tricks along the way but it has nothing that deserves a happy ending. More like a Romeo and Juliet ending would be in order here.
Love scars. Love wounds and mars.... Nazareth. He said he would have killed them if he had not come up with this plan. I now a thing or two I learned from you.....
hit the K key a little harder in the last sentence of my comment.
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Anonymous01/25/12
Nice revenge & payback tale!
Liked it [and the slut deserved every bit of the punishment & chaos]!
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Anonymous01/25/12
This was horrible!!!!!
What she did was morally wrong, what her so-called husband did was criminal. Even his lawyer would be forced to hand over theateri on question to ascertain whether to lay criminal charges or not and no matter who tells you, no sleeping pill in the world canals you react to sexual stimuli. Meaning, there would be no way to hide the fact that she was unconscious during her rape! So maybe she did cheat, her husband is a sex offender and their friends...? They are no better.
Usually respect your stories and the plot line along with character development. What Joan did deserves consequences but not rape. I have trained personnel to work at rape crisis centers and this revenge would have left such a mark on her so that her life could be over without lots of strength and significant help. If she was having trouble with Ray imagine what she must think about ex hubby. If I would have this happen to a patient in real life I would assist her in any way to put her despicable ex in jail. Sue needs to have her head examined to for getting involved with him after seeing how he dealt with the infidelity, how might he deal with disappointment in his kids or whatever. Or, how he left her to deal with the aftermath after he slip. He was so cowardly.
English
Pretty awful
You've done lots better, but this one is crap. The writing's too choppy, the characters are unsympathetic, and setting up a gang rape as revenge is just plain horrid.
Good Read!!!!
Something different and very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.
DG Hear you did one hell of a job
this was to short, you need to fuck the slut over some more. What gang rape Gravyrug, you can't rape a lying whore. She was just a little tired and besides her true love held open her legs and fucked her to. *****5 stars plus*****
A vehicle for revenge
While I appreciate the plan for a revenge that would forever poison the relationship between Ray and Joan (which seemed to be the central premise of the story), I just couldn't get over the fact that hubby had his wife gang-raped. I don't think killing or raping are ever acceptable methods of revenge against for cheating. Especially, as here, when it is so cold-blooded and the result of sober planning. It also stretched the bounds of credibility that the guys would all just go along with it.
The recordings actually should have made things easier for hubby-to hear that wife is in love with another man (rather than you) is easier in some ways than hearing that she loves you, but is betraying you for whatever reason-it gives you the closure you need to move on.
Well-written, and a clever idea to poison the love that has ruined your marriage, but I just couldn't get over the rape and the amount of suspension of disbelief required.
Thank you
Hey..... another great story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one. The world is full of critics..... but who cares what they think. Please keep writing. Thank you.
Good One
I liked this story alot. Joan never really loved her husband. He was just a paycheck with a dick. The world is full of bitches just like her.
Ok story
Story was ok , but the ending to me was weak .
Gravy was right.
Our hero arranged a gang rape of his wife. He screwed her after four other guys had her. He talked his friends into cheating on their wives. He secretly filmed them doing it. With friends like him, no one needs any enemies.
Disgusting
I read stories that have four star ratings because they usually are the best. This one, however, is just plain disgusting. How can anyone rate this four and five stars unless the readers are perverts that enjoy having a guy set up a gang rape of his wife. He deserves jail time instead of sympathy.
Well, at least I can say I found no technical problems with the writing.
Ain't Nothing Like A Gangbang A Cheating Wife Story To Blow Away the Blues
" She was smiling/ thru her tears/ for 150 years ..." - Alex Harvey . That song actually got radio play 30 some years ago not likely today eh ? The story was pretty rote with nary a shred of novelty but it was amusing urban legend telling. 4****.
I disagree with the negative comments
The wife in this story earned and enjoyed her treatment on the card playing evening. Husband was correct - if she had simply asked for a divorce, he would have given her one.
Still waiting
For a bad story from your pen. Maybe next time LOL!
Dear MarvinS
I have three things to say
1) great story. DGH delivered again.
2) she got what she deserved
3) if you don't like fair retribution, fuck you
MarvinS was right: Disgusting
Normally, DGH's stories are not like that. I've read far better stories posted by him. Gang-rape is not a way to deal with a cheating wife!
Readers reactions are interesting
Well written story with a solid premise.
I'm somewhat surprised by some of the comments about the morality of using rape as a means for revenge. I don't want to sound like an apologist for rape because in REAL LIFE it is, in all cases, immoral. But I admit that the rape element in this story did not outrage me. Honestly I thought the scheme was quite elegant on many levels.
I just find it interesting that I've read similar revenge stories on this site, where wives have been bred with dogs, left naked in an inner-city crack house, or surreptitiously sent to Latin American brothels with nary a comment on the morality of the revenge.
Just an observation.
liked everything but the rape
just don't like that - everything else was great. but it did put the lover in a bad light and i wonder if there was another way to do it.
Rape or no?
Technically, there is no doubt rape occurred. This is a FICTIONAL story. In this STORY, the only people clearly 'hurt' by this incident were Joan and Ray, and that 'hurt' was to screw up their future relationship. # Tough...they were both involved in callously and deliberately screwing up our protagonist's life! I think this is cleverly conceived FICTION (& the author COULD have arranged the timing and circumstances to leave her pregnant with a mixed-race bonus in this STORY!)! DGH did NOT advocate for gang-rape as a general act.
# balancing that 'hurt' we have three counts of satisfying long-term fantasies, plus a back-door bonus for hubby...heck, even a farewell shot for Ray! Excellent trade-off in my opinion!
5*
Dear Anonymous 'nary a word'
I can't speak for everyone here. DG is a writer I respect and he seems to have a sense of morality. This is not something he normally writes and is a bit simple for his normal work.
Those other writers, I frequently don't comment on at all. One guy had a woman trapped in a cage in the desert. (Shakes head) As one of the writers here said: "How can you hold other people in contempt if you behave as contemptibly?" (paraphrase) She cheated. He was not exactly a moral beacon.
Bad
The "hero" should get about 20 some odd years to think about it.
If you are done with someone, just leave them, but crap like a rape is disgusting
Cheaters Never Prosper
Liked it. Revenge is sweet. She chose to cheat, not him. She conspired with his so called friend. She got off easy. Good Tale DG!! No wimp Zone! Need wimp cuckold catagory.
Great story
Loved the slow build up and drama...then thoroughly enjoyed the extreme revenge...then the soft coda. Well written, well paced and well plotted. Thank you for entertaining me with your literary talents DG Hear.
To all the Internet tough guys!
So all you guys think this was a just and fair reitribution. I guess I'm just a wimp ass cuck and all the other names you losers usually throw out because I think no one no matter what they did deserves to get drugged and gang raped. Those pesky morals of mine getting in the way again.
What about the fact that all of his friends were married to women he knew, guess that's just a minor thing if rapes ok in your screwed up mind.
I wonder if all you guys would screaming hell yea if we flipped this around and a cheated on wife got together 5 girlfriends with strap on's to fuck the cheaters ass bloody. Maybe you closet woman hating homo's would prefer him waking up covered in cum bleeding from his ass after the wife let him be queen for a night.
I just finished reading chocolate covered cherries and hometown hero and I'm very disappointed in DGhear with this one. It at best belonged in Nonconsent as it featured a rape.
5 stars for a CRS.
A Cruel Revenge Story (CRS). For me the gang bang with drugged woman is not my taste, but a happy ending epiloge compenzated this. My question remains If DG Hear can write wrong story??????
Sub-standard, to say the least
Definitely not up to DGH's normally high standards. He went for the cheap over-the-top revenge rather than finding a better way to satisfy his need for retribution. And involving his friends in adultery was tacky and not the mark of someone with high character. Finally, the hook-up with Sue was a contrived happily-ever-after solution that did not ring true. Alex basically ran off and left her to clean up the mess he created by his very public exposure of his wife and her husband, yet she was able to get past that and make him her new husband. Not realistic. This author has done much better, but then you can't hit a homer every time at the plate.
Did not care for
the kidnapping and rape, but the rest of the story was very good. 3*
Good stuff
Good plot, nice twist of the revenge knife. And a happy ending for him and Sue! All is well. 5 star
Good and short!
You always have a good story but could be a longer.
Not for Me
I usually like almost anything from DG Hear but this one doesn't do it for me. I guess I must be a WACC or whatever but even a lying slut can say "no" and if she does, it's rape. He didn't do his friends any favors either. Here he is, all put out about the fact his wife is screwing around, and what does he do? He convinces people who are supposed to be his friends to screw around on their wives. Not only that but he drops a pile of manure on the woman for whom he is supposed to have some feelings and then vanishes leaving her to deal with the aftermath alone. Sue must be a masochist otherwise she would be staying well clear of this guy.
Have always loved DG but didnt love this one.Rob conner is right. cheaters dont prosper. one partner came to know the other was cheating, gang rape was not needed. payback is a bitch.
Weak premise
I am a fan of DGH but not this story. First, I never connected with anyone in it. Next, the rape setup was too pat for me. There is a HUGE difference between wanting to screw a beautiful woman and raping her. Getting all his friends to agree, especially after Ray voiced his objections, is about zero.
Why would Ray first object then participate? Just because he was horny?
Next, when Joan woke up, she suspected immediately that something was wrong. What if she went to the hospital for a rape test. Also, people talk, there is a saying that they only way to keep a secret is with a conspiracy of one. Ray blabs and everyone else's marriage is on the line. Drunk or not, the odds of everyone agreeing and then keeping quiet are minimal.
Ttom
Lovvvved it
Lovvvvvved it
DG 10 stars fa ya.
HOT.DG u wrote this well. could have been in non consent/reluctance. Give us next story with a rape fuck by at least ten guys. would be hot sex.
Good rape story. Can you write BDSM too.Please write some good BDSM.
Five stars
Enjoyed the sex.
Yes
Now that is a GOOD story. I love the way he got the revenge and then happily ever after. A good read
Interesting Payback Story
A unique and different story. Well written, and of course well edited.
A fascinating take on revenge. I enjoyed reading Ray squirm as Joan was getting plowed. The coward. Great job.
Then Alex marrying Sue, and her pregnant with their child. The ultimate in revenge,and such glorious payback.
Joan and Ray bumps on the road to a loving couples true happiness.
Gotta love it!
Thank you!
the rape
Was over the top to me,it was making the punishment fit worse then the crime. His buds were no better and ray was a piece of crap too,he didn't try to stop them or call the cops. No one is blameless except due,the wife may have loved ray but she wanted to stay because hubby was so good to her.He could have found ways to humiliate them both without the rape,shown the pictures to friends and family,made their lives hell.
Amen to Hawkeye's comment! As to the so called "rape", ...
that was the screwing she got for the screwing she had been getting! Cheers.
por tanto, siempre a las prostitutas ... cinco estrellas!!!
D.G. has given to us a great story worth Five Stars! "Thus always to whores!"
Half comments say right Half comments say wrong. Guys all our dicks are telling story is dick raising.be horny
Well Written and Well Contrived
But the protagonist is as bad as his wife and socalled friend in terms of actions.
There were a lot of clever tricks along the way but it has nothing that deserves a happy ending. More like a Romeo and Juliet ending would be in order here.
Yes,
agree, the rape seen is a big turn off, plus the story is really sad . Ah the reunions........you should hear about mine.
ДА товарищь
, не очень эротическая история. Not very erotic
Love Hurts
Love scars. Love wounds and mars.... Nazareth. He said he would have killed them if he had not come up with this plan. I now a thing or two I learned from you.....
I should have...
hit the K key a little harder in the last sentence of my comment.
Nice revenge & payback tale!
Liked it [and the slut deserved every bit of the punishment & chaos]!
This was horrible!!!!!
What she did was morally wrong, what her so-called husband did was criminal. Even his lawyer would be forced to hand over theateri on question to ascertain whether to lay criminal charges or not and no matter who tells you, no sleeping pill in the world canals you react to sexual stimuli. Meaning, there would be no way to hide the fact that she was unconscious during her rape! So maybe she did cheat, her husband is a sex offender and their friends...? They are no better.
This story makes me ashamed to be a man.
Disappointed in you DG
Usually respect your stories and the plot line along with character development. What Joan did deserves consequences but not rape. I have trained personnel to work at rape crisis centers and this revenge would have left such a mark on her so that her life could be over without lots of strength and significant help. If she was having trouble with Ray imagine what she must think about ex hubby. If I would have this happen to a patient in real life I would assist her in any way to put her despicable ex in jail. Sue needs to have her head examined to for getting involved with him after seeing how he dealt with the infidelity, how might he deal with disappointment in his kids or whatever. Or, how he left her to deal with the aftermath after he slip. He was so cowardly.
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