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Dollhouse Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Headguy02/04/12

Great start

Nice mix of mystery and eros. I hope the next chapter arrives more quickly.

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by Anonymous03/04/12

Great Idea

Really good start. Maybe she made the daughter think that her father was her husband or something like that. Hope you continue.

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by Anonymous03/07/12

Good

Please add another installment

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by Anonymous06/30/12

ch 3

How about the daughter dominates other dolls?

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by Anonymous09/18/12

MMMMM.....

interesting story, may be in the next installment the daughter is a Dom, and keeps the mum/dad and now marcus under control

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by Anonymous09/23/12

MMMMM

Delicious! Tell us more please.

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by Anonymous10/15/12

It seems obvious to me that the father is the "lifelike dildo." Looking forward to the daughter though.MORE, please?

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by fade-into-you10/16/12

Curious

Just curious as to whether or not there's another chapter planned...? It is a thoroughly... captivating series.

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by 49greg05/09/13

I like it!

Totally twisted, but very much a fun and erotic story. I hope that the author will finish it, although since it's been a year or more since it was posted I'm guessing not.

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by spankfunfor08/01/13

Dollhouse unfinished story.

Great start to the story! Marcus gets shut up then a blow job as doll size real people in their Mistress's prison she calls her doll house. We never learn what her daughters' curse is and what will become of them? The end of the story, unfinished, got boring!

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by 49greg05/20/15

I still like it!

It's still a great story and still totally twisted, but now it's frustrating because we don't know what happens next, what happens with/to the daughter, and what about the husband? What do they eat and drink, is there shelter/warmth somewhere so they don't die of exposure?

It really needs to be finished.

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by Anonymous08/17/16

Where the next one

I like where you where going with this story. Too bad you dropped off the map before finishing what you started.

This would be a good one for someone else to run with.

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