All Comments on 'Coming of Age Ch. 01'

The table is set, the candle lit, but we have not seen either the menue or the food.

Your story would have been much better if it were longer. It's hard to write a good sex scene, I'm not so good at it myself, but to complete this story, you've got to write a lot of them. Probably should have written the first one before publishing this introduction.

THat said, it's well written.