by learsdaughter
awesome story i loved the detail really had me going i was rock hard by the time you got the text ! keep them cumming
The title intrigued me. I happily found this story kind of different. In a popular genre like sex and sensuality it is not easy to accomplish anything unique, but your story here comes close. It had the great quality of being believable, which is also difficult to achieve. I hope it is considered the greatest of compliments when I say, "It got me hard, and happy!" Thanks, Will
As a female, I prefer stories to movies. You totally got my attention and kept it thru the entire read. I only WISH something of this nature would happen to me. So as my compliment to you, my dear, know that you had me extremely aroused. I look forward to reading this again, as I will anything else you publish. :) <3
Now this is a five! Much better than the lost one. Oh well, some are always better than others. Now I get to read the rest of your stuff.
I love the detail in the story and the slow lead in. Very imaginative - a paper cock. I like the title.
Well written and thought out, makes me want to put my self into and envelope and mail it to you:) Cant wait to read more.