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strange but haunting
pretty well done - keep it up - i will read more when you have it.
I problems
I this, I that...sometimes it is good to know other pronouns.
It is good to be a disleksik
I found no problems with this magically Delicious story. Intoxicating- that is a word.
Great, but really short.
It was perfect, but it almost seems like you cut parts out.
He laid back to get teased, because it was her game, and the next sentence, she's guiding him in. I would have loved reading about the teasing, too.
hypnotising
amazing read short n sweet.....best part was u returned life's essence....loved it..
wow
Hypnotic!!!
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