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FerrumitzalFerrumitzalabout 12 years ago

Yea, that didn't really work for me. Not bad writing, but the plot is running dry. I'd rather have seen Jenny come into the fold than be turned into a beast because of something so petty. That's an entire story arc that could have been used to great effect, and now it's gone.

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