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Posing Wife

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/28/12

Very Interesting

I think you could bet the farm on her affairs... I, too, think my wife did in her painting... Just last night we discusssed OR I tried to dicuss her nude painting... no comment from her

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by gmach101/28/12

Very good story.

Liked the story - very believable.

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by bruce2201/28/12

This is more of a sketch

The characters do not really come across as they would have, had you worked out the dialogue with the painter and with her husband.

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by Anonymous01/28/12

Crap

Dry cunt.Wimp hubby

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by nakdsub01/28/12

At least this was short and....

I didn't waste too much time before it turned into a cuckold story. I just don't see why these authors can't simply put, "cuckold story," in a prologue.

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by Anonymous01/28/12

Slut Wife/Wimp Hubby

Is this really erotic? I think not. Just another cuckold piece of tripe.If your going to write this garbage put it in Fetish where it belongs or preface it as being cuckold so I dont waste my time

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by Anonymous01/28/12

Different thoughts on fidelity and love, me thinks. Should have given her the independence she wanted.

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by Anonymous01/28/12

More thought needed

A bland recitation of what she told him, paraphrased by the husband. Absent sexual description, absent emotion, action or conflict, what is left?
I finished it and said so who cares? It wasn't a big deal to her, nor to him, nor to me.

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by rjordan01/28/12

Not really a story

This was a mildly interesting diary entry, but a very good start on a possible story. If this really happened, it might have been more fun to extrapolate what you have into something that could have happened. You would have to ignore the anon crazies who would want to see the wife hung from a tree and gutted, but that's easily done.

You write well enough. Write more.

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by Duna01/28/12

This story would be better, if the husband tells us about his extramarital activity paralel with his wife. So he is only a wimp or a cuckoldry loving husband,instead a open married pair. Lack of the mutuality is 1 stars.

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by Anonymous01/28/12

Being stoned to death is good, gutting is so messy. Hanging? not reliable enough the bitch might survive. Of course an acid bath might work both for the cuckold wimp and the bitch whore as well.

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by chytown01/29/12

Very Bland.

Not a good read please try again when you have something to write about.

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by Anonymous01/29/12

Zippo

To burn the bitch and the writer also what a waist of digital ink. The whole thing sucked the sewer pipe. Made the maggots puke for sure.

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by Saxon_Hart01/29/12

I wish this story was printed on paper

Then I could burn it and save some other poor asshole from having to read it. Garbage. Complete garbage from a WACC writer.

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by Anonymous01/30/12

why all the negativity?

A good story. Well written and believable and gently sexy.

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by PymGordon77702/02/12

Not so bad - and very realistic

This story is not as bad as many say.
Short, perhaps the author could've build more tension.
But looks like it happened for real, which is very good!

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by Duna02/02/12

The negativity of the opnion the wimp husband who thinks the wife may have extramarital affairs but he has not any......The lack of the mutuality....

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by Anonymous02/08/12

Excellent

Very intriguing story... all start from a gift of the mother-in-law... great idea! I love the "flash" of her modelling topless and the idea of the husband seeing the nede and very identifiable image of the wife at art show. I hope the author adds a few details

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by Anonymous02/01/15

My nude wife

My wife posed nude for a guy a couple of times we love the pics ,it was her first time posing for other men she loved it .he also played with her nipples since they were pierced

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by Anonymous02/21/15

Where is the rest?

Great start but needs a lot of details to make it really hot.
What went on during the sessions? Touching? Fondling?
Fooling around? What were the poses?

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