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Outstanding!
Their experience with the interactive art exhibit was brilliant in the way it revealed each lover to the other.
so far so good!
Thoroughly enjoying your work so far. Keep it coming!
Amazing!
Your writing literally took my breath away. Amazing job!
Please come back!!!!!!!
Your story is so amazing! Please continue. I know how hard it is to juggle all of life's many balls, but there is always a little downtime. Just a little bit to stave off the hunger? Hope all is well and really hope to see you back soon.
Actually
"Ensam" means alone in swedish. : )
Like your story.
easter egg
to Foronce: you're a sharp one! :) of course he wouldn't tell her the true translation, would he?
nearly perfect
you are a gifted writer.
Just so brilliant
This chapter itself has made me almost speechless (but not quite, obviously!). The art exhibition you describe has highlighted something very special and in such a beautitul way - the way that they are both moving forward to something more. I would love to know, and maybe we will find out, what Gynweth pinned on the board and Aidan burned.
Awwwwwww - the romance!
... and sometimes when we touch ...
You have forced me to
Google about a dozen times through your use of the artistic background.
An awesome story. And a learning experience all in one.
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