All Comments on 'One Last Valentine's Day'

by CambriaRose

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Wow, such a great story. I'll admit it, I cried after reading it. Those two loved each other so much and to spend their last Valentine's Day like that, so beautiful and with so much love. Once again, Wow.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderabout 12 years ago
Nice.

Sad. Beautiful. True love.

(enough said)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Beautiful

I lost my Valentine to cancer a little over 8 years ago. Today would have been our 32nd anniversary. Thanks for such a beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I cried too. Sometimes it seems unfair. Cherish the moments.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Sad.I lost my wife 10 years back. Hard to lose someone you love.Still remember the look on her face when she died.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Beautiful!

If only all of our loved ones were to pass in such a peaceful way. A beautiful description of a Loving relationship that ended as it was lived.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Grief knits two hearts in closer bonds than happiness ever can; And common sufferings are far stronger links than common joys

-Nicam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
You will win this contest **

Love is stronger than death even though it can't stop death from happening, but no matter how hard death tries it can't separate people from love.

It can't take away our memories either.

In the end, love is stronger than death

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Beautiful. Such love those two had. Tears in my eyes after reading this story.

chytownchytownabout 12 years ago
Great Piece!!!!!

Of writing.

Dual_TriodeDual_Triodeabout 12 years ago
Bittersweet

So sad yet joyful. Love knows no bounaries or limits.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Easy fix...

"He grimaced. "Sara, we've been married ten years, I think I can tell when your fibbing. ". Should be "you're fibbing" ... Otherwise, great writing and wonderful touching story.

donaldedonaldeabout 12 years ago
what a sweet sad tale

beautiful lovely tale that was very enjoyable. Good luck with the contest you certainly have my vote

CambriaRoseCambriaRoseabout 12 years agoAuthor
Doink!

To anon: I should have notice the "your" vs you're. I been doing that a lot lately. Too much multitasking!

Thank you all for your (the RIGHT 'your' this time lol) kind comments!

estragonestragonabout 12 years ago
Couldn't Quibble

Eyes tearing too much. Beautiful, CambriaRose!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Drug?

Did you mean 'dragged'? Apart from that, very well written. You got the whole making love bit just how I like it; hot and arousing yet tender and loving at the same time. Thank you thank you thank you! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Not quite sure what to make of it

I didn't really care for it. I thought it was poorly written, the paragraphys didn't flow smoothly, they actually jumped around, and the story line was very weak. Sorry but that is my opinion.

farthmaulfarthmaulabout 12 years ago

Simple yet great. I <3 this story.

MaddieKimMaddieKimabout 12 years ago
Crying

I knew where this story was going a third of the way in and already had tears in my eyes. It was beautiful, sad, and so full of love. I agree with estragon; there is no way I could ‘quibble’ when I felt the devotion in this relationship. It was an amazing story and I gave it the highest marks.

persephone9906persephone9906about 12 years ago
Beautiful Devotion

What a lovely tear-jerker love story. Beautifully done. The devotion from both characters came through so clearly, it could be felt. I hope you'll write more stories because I would certainly like to read them. I'll just know that I may need tissues at hand when I'm reading. Nicely done and 5 stars from me to you.

Mostera1Mostera1about 12 years ago
Thank you!

Very touching story of true love separated way too early. Words cannot express the emotion your story stirred. It is so difficult when a loved one is lost so young. I think I will go home and give the special someone I love an extra special hug tonight.

Thanks to MaddieK for sharing.

And a special thanks to you for a poignant loving story.

M1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very, Very Good

Very tenderly told. And rather a surprise.

HP

fafhrd09fafhrd09almost 11 years ago
Sweetr and sad (nt)

(Title says it all)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wonderful ...

very touching

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow

Made me cry like a baby.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 8 years ago
Sad

What a sad tale. Sometimes true love hurts.

l_bentonl_bentonalmost 6 years ago
Wonder-full thank you

i love stories like this. thank you.

l_benton@yahoo.com

l_bentonl_bentonalmost 6 years ago
heart breaker

i only hope my wife's and my last valentine's is as special. thank you so much for your story it was great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

The hole could never be replaced? Not even with time or a heart surgeon? Why is the last line her posthumously bitching about dirty clothes? I think he is in a better place now.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15about 4 years ago
Sweet Story!

Beautiful, sweet and loving.

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