As an artist, I appreciate your work, Marguerite. Your sense of volume and use of negative space is very good. I hope to see more of you work.
Beautiful as always.
Like the colors, and the folds, do you have more
very beautiful painting i can almost feel the muscles and wonder how smooth her skin is.
Your work is very good. You even got the feet right, something which Gauguin had a hard time doing. She appears as though she is awaiting the arrival of her lover in anticipation of some toe-curling sex. In fact, the memory of past love-making sessions is curling her toes. Again, very good.
You really are exceptionally talented, thank you for sharing your work.
beautiful in it's simplicity so evocatively rendered!
Aha! I see you did a newer variation here. I love variations!
I would quibble with your mentioning "unusual colors". Colors and tonal qualities are very much dependent on what the artist sees as well as the pallet of colors they have to choose from. Sometimes, "odd colors" need to be shown to enhance the separation of two different materials but of similar hue. Why you didn't do this on the right side is a little beyond me. The highlight colors on the body seem almost too similar to the hues of the sheets/background.
I think you used more "outline" on this painting which perceptibly lowers your deftness of style. The first version showed less use of outline so you used color better to indicate borders there...
I see in this version, the spinal hollow is more defined (it's marvelous that you had read my last comment and revisited it to make this version in only a matter of minutes! XD ), but I wonder if it is in it's correct location? The spine looks correct in location to the back, but the cleft of the buttocks looks a little too far to the left??
With that exception, I think you worked the proportions much better this time...
Likewise your choice of colors is exemplary. This variation looks less rushes, the background squiggles look softer and more relaxed.
Feet and hands, again, wonderful!
Again, some hits and some misses, but an overall good piece. :)
BTW, what medium are you using? I can't quite tell if it is watercolor or acrylic?
serene and dignified, very feminine, and erotic at the same time, excellent work!!
This is better done than the first "Simply Waiting."
The erotic element is more pronounced here. I suspect, dear Marguerite, that you are the girl in both paintings.
Such a serene pose great job
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