All Comments on 'Valentine Threesome'

This is very well written in my opinion. The prose is a lot better than some of the junk you read on the Internet. I like the descriptive text and it is very hot and sexy. Great job.

I just can't get past the licking of things after they've been in someone's ass. Yuck! Not to mention dangerous from a health perspective (guess you've never had a salmonella or e-choli infection, not sexy!)

Sorry, a little bit of anal sex goes a long way with me. Your story was just too much anal for me. An anus is not a sexual organ, never was, never will be. If you want to write stories about normal sex, I'll be glad to read them.

Such a fun little piece of writing. Loved how surprised the guy was and how bold his girlfriend was. The anal play was an added bonus. Cudos to you!

Great erotica, keep writing. The build up with the romantic foreplay and then how the story takes a turn into really hot and primal sex....wow!