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Amazing...
This story is awesome, so unlike anything I have ever read before. It is very well written and extremely intriguing. I hope you continue to write, I cannot wait for the next installment.
Intriguing
Very well written, I'm glad to see your heroine seems to have a spine - I would definitely like to read more.
more please
This is a very good story so far. I would love to read more.
Moore
Want more!!!
More Please!
Great start. Please keep writing.
We want more drrling!!! MORE MORE MORE
I am truly intrigued by this story. I've read all three chapters you've posted and am anxious to read the rest. My only criticism besides the odd misspelled word here or there, would be to slow down and really flesh this story out. I think you've begun with some very interesting characters and relationships, but at times it feels hurried and a little hackneyed. Keep at it, take your time, and you'll have a story I'll want to put in my very short favorites list. Thanks!
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