All Comments on 'We Didn't Know'

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Just didn't see it coming. Thank you.

This is not even a chapter, just the beginning of one - just a teaser. If it were a movie it would be just a trailer. Please don't submit until you have a story of some sort.

Fucking drag man. Sick and tired of authors that try to make the barest possible link between two people, and call it incest. It's just nerdy, boring and fake okay?

Maybe if there was an actual story here instead of barely a synopsis, I might have a different view...

To short and not incest.

5 stars. waiting on the next one.

that some of these dumb ass comment leavers don't realize that this is a incest/taboo category. Doesn't always have to be incest . I liked it . Brings back old memories ,.

I get the taboo part but too short lol.. Add more chapters. Do the parents find out.. shoot since they ain't blood be kinda funny if they had a double wedding ;)

a step sister to be, so what is so taboo. There is no blood relationship and they have not growen up together. So what is it doing in this Catagory??? 1*

I am looking forward for the next chapter =)

ps : for all the chat about rather it s or not incest, it only depend of the definition, in some country sleep with the mother, then daugther is considered incest, in some just if you have a "bloodline and a sex line" is enought =)

son - bloodline - father - sex line - stepmother - bloodline - step sister - sex line - son

so in a way it s incest for some beliefs

anyway great story continue

This one is way too short. They do a blood test when you get married, just to be sure that bride and groom are not somehow related, These two, so far as we know, are not related. it is just going to be awkward indeed, if both parents figure it out that son and daughter have already bedded each other. In my opinion, Justin getting Molly knocked up, before their parents can get married would really stir the pot. I would really like to read Rebecca's reaction to the news that Molly has already had sex with Justine! Would that cause a problem for them---or not?

this is no where near to being in postable condition. theres no background just a sloppy rushed middle and no end. all you wrote is an outline for part of a story. delete and rewrite and add the background to tell who they are and how they got together then slow down the action and build the plot. then write a second chapter to finish it off properly. as said by others if this was a movie it would only be a trailer.

No plot, no substance.