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Allyson Ch. 04

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by pkma01/31/12

Worth the wait

Great story. Nice twists and turns. I would like to see more development on the periferal characters but it's your story and it's one of the good ones.

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by Anonymous02/01/12

Why is this in Romance?

This ain't fuckin' anywhere near being a romance.

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by smiling_reader02/02/12

Beautiful!

Welcome back! This just made my week :)

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