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The Red Herring

byCallMeBambi©
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by Anonymous

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by hansbwl02/04/12

Dark!

Very good story, sad, dark, but good flash story.

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by Anonymous02/04/12

Great first

Loved your story. But the system would not accept my vote fo a five. Thanks and looking forward to your next stories.

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by JonTaylor02/04/12

Loving Wives?

Good little moment. Would get more readers in loving wives.

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by RHinSC02/04/12

Very Good

She should not have played with matches.

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by tazz31702/05/12

MAKES ON WONDER

was it for life or her lovers I.D. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Salamis02/05/12

Short, sweet...

...and to the point. This was a good first story.

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by Anonymous02/06/12

I AM NOT SURE

IF HE WAS GETTING HER LOCKED UP FOR ABUSE OR ATTEMPTED MURDER O.K. OTHERWISE ???????????. IF THE FIRST TWO THEN 4 IF ? THEN 3

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by DFWBeast07/13/13

Well played!

Enjoyed it very much! Very interesting little slice of a scene.

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