Had a good story to it needs more details, parts were rushed, would like to see part 2
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Anonymous02/04/12
Interesting short story
Many women in Aunt Jean situation would take the opportunity to properly train the young lad. An aunt and mom need to take responsibility for disciplining for the panty behavior. Most women react quite differently than in this story
i gave up after the 1st paragraph skipped to the comments and then decided to give it another go i wish i hadnt,a previous comment said a little rushed in parts-ffs t didnt have any parts,please dont bother with part 2
Your story is bad. There is so many unrealistic things to be into it.
A 18 years old boy who never masturbated. Get real.
The woman have sex with him too easily. It's too easy that it isn't even exciting.
It's an erotica story so elaborate the sexual encounters. 3 lines to describe an entire sex act is not enough.
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Anonymous02/15/12
Littleprick is a fucking idiot
1.EVERY MAN till the day they die masturbates when possible.
2.Write your own story then if you feel it was not descriptive enough?
[My opinions now]
1.You should draw it out more, and describe everything more vividly.
2.To short....extend upon it.
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Anonymous02/19/12
amazing
u got to it right away
and it was such a hot story
btw i wish it was my reality :P
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Anonymous03/13/14
Little Robbie, His Mom and Auntie ( Great !!! )
A wonderful and fantastic story, I only hope that it or part of the story was true.
English
Very Good
Had a good story to it needs more details, parts were rushed, would like to see part 2
Interesting short story
Many women in Aunt Jean situation would take the opportunity to properly train the young lad. An aunt and mom need to take responsibility for disciplining for the panty behavior. Most women react quite differently than in this story
utter crap
i gave up after the 1st paragraph skipped to the comments and then decided to give it another go i wish i hadnt,a previous comment said a little rushed in parts-ffs t didnt have any parts,please dont bother with part 2
Not the deepest story line but...
It was pretty hot. Would love to see where you go with a part 2.
sucked
terribad
needs a lot of reworking
in a few lines we went from studying to putting his cock in silky undies and getting caught and she says, thats ok i see you like them
how unrealistic
utter garbage
Rewrite it
Your story is bad. There is so many unrealistic things to be into it.
A 18 years old boy who never masturbated. Get real.
The woman have sex with him too easily. It's too easy that it isn't even exciting.
It's an erotica story so elaborate the sexual encounters. 3 lines to describe an entire sex act is not enough.
Littleprick is a fucking idiot
1.EVERY MAN till the day they die masturbates when possible.
2.Write your own story then if you feel it was not descriptive enough?
[My opinions now]
1.You should draw it out more, and describe everything more vividly.
2.To short....extend upon it.
amazing
u got to it right away
and it was such a hot story
btw i wish it was my reality :P
Little Robbie, His Mom and Auntie ( Great !!! )
A wonderful and fantastic story, I only hope that it or part of the story was true.
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