All Comments on 'Little Robbie, His Mom and Auntie'

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FRSWRITERFRSWRITERabout 12 years ago
Very Good

Had a good story to it needs more details, parts were rushed, would like to see part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Interesting short story

Many women in Aunt Jean situation would take the opportunity to properly train the young lad. An aunt and mom need to take responsibility for disciplining for the panty behavior. Most women react quite differently than in this story

bartermanbartermanabout 12 years ago
utter crap

i gave up after the 1st paragraph skipped to the comments and then decided to give it another go i wish i hadnt,a previous comment said a little rushed in parts-ffs t didnt have any parts,please dont bother with part 2

A4mushroomA4mushroomabout 12 years ago
Not the deepest story line but...

It was pretty hot. Would love to see where you go with a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
sucked

terribad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
needs a lot of reworking

in a few lines we went from studying to putting his cock in silky undies and getting caught and she says, thats ok i see you like them

how unrealistic

utter garbage

LittleprickLittleprickabout 12 years ago
Rewrite it

Your story is bad. There is so many unrealistic things to be into it.

A 18 years old boy who never masturbated. Get real.

The woman have sex with him too easily. It's too easy that it isn't even exciting.

It's an erotica story so elaborate the sexual encounters. 3 lines to describe an entire sex act is not enough.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Littleprick is a fucking idiot

1.EVERY MAN till the day they die masturbates when possible.

2.Write your own story then if you feel it was not descriptive enough?

[My opinions now]

1.You should draw it out more, and describe everything more vividly.

2.To short....extend upon it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
amazing

u got to it right away

and it was such a hot story

btw i wish it was my reality :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Little Robbie, His Mom and Auntie ( Great !!! )

A wonderful and fantastic story, I only hope that it or part of the story was true.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 5 years ago
Beautiful story of love.

All boys should experience such uninhabited sex with mother and auntie. Reminds me of my mother and myself.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 4 years ago
Outline for a good story

I enjoyed the story but it seems that there is so much detail missing, almost like this is an outline for the story. I guess it's difficult to get too involved in only one page, but it would have made a much better story if it were.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just gave it average cause it was to short!!!!!!!!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a10 months ago

Good story but needs indepth character development.

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