All Comments on 'Sissy Maids & Sex Slaves Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Too much "you..." this and "you..." that. Make it a story. Good content tho just loses with you telling a Mistress what She is to do.

RickyRoosterRickyRoosterabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks

For the feedback. And I take your point. The 'story' is a collection of e-mails to a lady friend tellingher how I anticipate our eventual meeting will take place and what will then happen. I agree, though, that if she is to be the mistress I shouldn't really be directing. This is/was a departure from my usual style. Lesson learned. Thank you for your constructive critique.

Ricky.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I looking for a MASTER and MISTRESS to turn me into a sissy male maid

i looking for a MASTER and a MISTRESS to keep me as their sissy maid all the time and to tieme up and put a drity things in my mouth to gag me and blindfold me to and rent me out to theu can make monry off of me to

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Hello Everyone, I'm Ricky. I'm an educated, articulate, experienced bi guy with a good sense of humour. I'm liberated with a very laid back attitude. I love all forms of erotica but in particular the written word. It turns me on reading a well written erotic story. I have a ...