All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 06'

but plz write longer chapters...

"Compassion is not confined to humanity little one."

Since I mostly write nonhuman that quote absolutely got to me. Beautiful. :)

There's almost a hypnotic quality to this story--it softly pulls us in.

I honestly dont give a fuck about all the rest of this shit i just skip it cause its boring as hell! I only read the parts about David(Aqua). So cut the bull shit. Thank you! :)

Honestly, it's the first time I post a comment but only because I've been following your stories for years. I just thought this *boring truth* comment was funny. I love them all.

Is usually not a human trait. Human beings are the most dangerous and evil creatures on earth.

I usually don't like vampire stories, but you've woven such a rich, interesting story, I'm enthralled. You've created a wonderful transition from the man who thought he might "snap his ribs like toothpicks" to one who is learning how sweet it is to truly care for someone.

The quality of your writing is refreshing. You understand how to weave a spell with words and I'm enchanted. I will happily read whatever I can find that you've written.

I am loving this story! You characters are very well made and the storyline has me captivated.

Good job!!

fantastic... you have my attension now.?

i feel like ive a head cold reading this, i was hoping for excitement .but i find this lacking. but since ive nothing else to do i will continue to read

i concur with birdman and OMG roughboy18 i love your story the pace is fine the texture is full you are an exceptional writer and despite all the off putting comments i hope you continue to write and refine your art... ya rock!!!!love ittt keep writing dont ever stop.love nix