All Comments on 'Fire and Ice'

Wonderful start to two great characters!

Fab start on a story! Hope that you will keep going as you've definitely piqued interest with the story line & characters. I especially like the male lead's interesting character.

K.Veracious

You're a good writer, keep it up

Please Continue

Great start!

more please

I think you should keep going. I really like it.

Definitely interested in more!

That was a very tasty chapter. Please keep it going. Lovely start..

This is a nice start for a great story. Please continue it.

I'm very interested in more...please continue

Keep writing I'm hooked!!!!!

Lovely! Please tell us how this story unfolds. :)

Uhm, you can't just stop like that.

Pls pls pls keep writing this story

I was like, oh god another twilight wannabe. But she was smart, suspicious and genuine. I liked your character development and sense of reality. Looking forward to what comes next.

So good please continue x

this is my first time reading you and I'm glad I found this story. Thanks to the tags for this story I at least know he is a vamp, but nothing more. Has he been stalking Emma? Or is Adam there to go to college and found Emma by surprise? You leave me with lots of question that only the next chapter can start to answer. So yes, this story should be told.

This is a great story.

I have to know what happens next! Please!

This reminds me of twilight. But it is different... looks like it will be better than twilight..

I really light that emma is intuitive and observant and not toally clueless; cant wait to see what happens.

it'll be mean not to continue. Dont let us all hanging long please

its a great start to a story, cant wait to see what happens next

This is well written, and I like Emma. She's a very realistic character.

PLEASE continue, it's be a waste of time posting this without continuing, PLEASE write more

It's a cute story with good writing and please keep writing. Longer posts though please :)

You better keep writing.Its no fun leaving someone hanging XD.

Great story and I would like to see more please.

I would very much like to hear more about these two ;) x

Please write more! I love it!

i really liked it and would love to hear more. I agree that longer would be better.

Yes, do write more, I am excited to read it

EOM

that was a cliffhanger!! continue please...

Adam is soooo romantic (and devious in a good way - hahahaha... a contradiction!!!)

Guys should be like that. LOL!!! :)

SERIOUSLY AWESOME!!!!

I really like it, keep writing it!!!!

I really like it so far--you need to write more! I like that she's not a helpless female character--she has smarts and she thinks about things too. That's cool.

This is a great start to a story. Rather short but good characters. Try to have several pages to a chapter.

can't wait to see more of this story...

i really liked this story, can't wait for more :)

I adore it :3 want more!

beginning to your story.....I really like it so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter, which is already posted. Thank you for a good start!!

Yes indeed I want to read more. This beginning has me intrigued as to who/what we are dealing with. I'm expecting to be pleasantly surprised (and aroused, too, of course).

Glad u continued!

I too am glad you decided to write more. Not enough of these stories here. For some reason, it's only women who can write this way.

plz don't stop

I'm loving where this is going and I love how you write! Can't wait to read more!

I love it! Write more please!

I like how it's started and would love to read more!

Love this beginning. Keep writing

Please keep writing.