Fire and Ice

Wonderful start to two great characters!

Please Keep Writing!

Fab start on a story! Hope that you will keep going as you've definitely piqued interest with the story line & characters. I especially like the male lead's interesting character.
K.Veracious

Consider giving up the day job

You're a good writer, keep it up

Great!

Please Continue

Keep going

Great start!

nice start

more please

I'm in ...

I think you should keep going. I really like it.

I liked it.

Definitely interested in more!

I'd like some more please ..

That was a very tasty chapter. Please keep it going. Lovely start..

nice start

This is a nice start for a great story. Please continue it.

very interesting start...

I'm very interested in more...please continue

Please.....

Keep writing I'm hooked!!!!!

Lovely! Please tell us how this story unfolds. :)

Excuse me

Uhm, you can't just stop like that.
Pls pls pls keep writing this story

at first when he already knew her drink. . .

I was like, oh god another twilight wannabe. But she was smart, suspicious and genuine. I liked your character development and sense of reality. Looking forward to what comes next.

I love it xxxx

So good please continue x

Nice Start

this is my first time reading you and I'm glad I found this story. Thanks to the tags for this story I at least know he is a vamp, but nothing more. Has he been stalking Emma? Or is Adam there to go to college and found Emma by surprise? You leave me with lots of question that only the next chapter can start to answer. So yes, this story should be told.

keep writing

This is a great story.

I'm gonna die!

I have to know what happens next! Please!

good start

This reminds me of twilight. But it is different... looks like it will be better than twilight..
I really light that emma is intuitive and observant and not toally clueless; cant wait to see what happens.

no

it'll be mean not to continue. Dont let us all hanging long please

keep writing!

its a great start to a story, cant wait to see what happens next

Hell yes, keep going!

This is well written, and I like Emma. She's a very realistic character.

PLEASE continue, it's be a waste of time posting this without continuing, PLEASE write more

Keep Writing

It's a cute story with good writing and please keep writing. Longer posts though please :)

You better keep writing then

You better keep writing.Its no fun leaving someone hanging XD.
Great story and I would like to see more please.

please keep writing!

I would very much like to hear more about these two ;) x

Please write more! I love it!

Keep Writing!

i really liked it and would love to hear more. I agree that longer would be better.

More Please

Yes, do write more, I am excited to read it

MORE!!!

EOM

OMG!!

that was a cliffhanger!! continue please...
Adam is soooo romantic (and devious in a good way - hahahaha... a contradiction!!!)
Guys should be like that. LOL!!! :)

MORE PLEASE!! SUPER CUTE!

SERIOUSLY AWESOME!!!!

Don't Stop!!!!

I really like it, keep writing it!!!!

this is great

I really like it so far--you need to write more! I like that she's not a helpless female character--she has smarts and she thinks about things too. That's cool.

great story

This is a great start to a story. Rather short but good characters. Try to have several pages to a chapter.

good start

can't wait to see more of this story...

i really liked this story, can't wait for more :)

I adore it :3 want more!

Excellent....

beginning to your story.....I really like it so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter, which is already posted. Thank you for a good start!!

more please

Yes indeed I want to read more. This beginning has me intrigued as to who/what we are dealing with. I'm expecting to be pleasantly surprised (and aroused, too, of course).

loved it!

Glad u continued!

Great so far

I too am glad you decided to write more. Not enough of these stories here. For some reason, it's only women who can write this way.

plz

plz don't stop

Seriously don't stop!

I'm loving where this is going and I love how you write! Can't wait to read more!

I love it! Write more please!

Keep it going!

I like how it's started and would love to read more!

Great story

Love this beginning. Keep writing

More

Please keep writing.