All Comments on 'Luc Left at Dawn to Save Jerusalem'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
HOW TO SAVE

a misbegotten derelict, TK U MLJ LV NV

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersabout 12 years ago
Well done.

Able use of form, meter and voice, and what a powerful close. Thank you for the poem.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 12 years ago
A nice traipse through the past

And beautifully scanned. S.O.

TzaraTzaraabout 12 years ago
Clear, well constructed, and simply excellent.

I don't know what else to say other than I'm envious, you should try and publish this elsewhere, and this is the best example of a "story" poem I have ever read at this site.

Really, really good, gm.

buttersbuttersabout 12 years ago
a prize-winner imo

awesome. just awesome.

meaty, gritty, passionate, a history lesson dished up as a plate of fabulous mediterranean cuisine.

i wish this was something i could have written, but love the fact that this is from your stables. thankyou.

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