by greenmountaineer
Able use of form, meter and voice, and what a powerful close. Thank you for the poem.
I don't know what else to say other than I'm envious, you should try and publish this elsewhere, and this is the best example of a "story" poem I have ever read at this site.
Really, really good, gm.
awesome. just awesome.
meaty, gritty, passionate, a history lesson dished up as a plate of fabulous mediterranean cuisine.
i wish this was something i could have written, but love the fact that this is from your stables. thankyou.