Flirting Goes Too Far

I Love A Happily Ever After Story

Heart felt, and heart warming. I heartily enjoyed your story.

Pleasant Ending

Flirting is dangerous and you have to know where your boundaries. Not flirting makes you look like and old stick. The start was painful but when he saw Lyn again he had all ready matured.

Another lovely story.

I truly enjoyed it.

Very nice!

Glad to see they reconnected, finally. Wasted years because of a failure to communicate. But without that there isn't a great story!
Thank you!
M1

your stories always are ! :-(

Great story

It took me 34 years to correct a communications problem, but now we are very happy together

good

Nice to see a good story from you again, not like the last few pieces of crap you submitted. I thought one of my favorite authors had gone all JPB .

That Anonymous guy said it all...

Welcome back DG. When you are yourself, you are just the best!

The guy is a dumbass

He doesn't deserve her.

Very Nice!

It is good to see a story where mistakes can be corrected and forgiven. Who hasn't screwed up royally at one time or another and if given the chance to fix it wouldn't jump at it. Nice to see romance can triumph over cynicism and bitterness.

Love your stories, but...

DG, I love your stories, but seriously, how many times are you going to enter this contest?

happy story, happy conclusion

I LOVE YOUR WORK... GOOD WRITING

Well done

Nice story, cute little tale.
thxs so much for posting

DG Hear

Thank you all for taking the time to comment on my stories, it's always much appreciated. As far as the number of stories for this contest, I write stories for fun. I submit them for the contest because a contest story usually gets posted the next day. It beats waiting three to five days to see a story get posted.

I write in spurts; when I get an idea I try and write it as soon as possible and I like to get them posted. It's not about the contest because you can only win once, but about the quick posting. Again, thanks to all of you who read, vote and comment on my stories.
With Respect
DG

Ah shucks...

Golly, love is in the air. Good love story. I enjoyed the read.

Excellent!!!!!!

This was an excellent story! It had a great story line with though romance and eroticsm to get a girl's juices flowing. ; )

Loved it and good luck with the contest!

THOSE BUCKEYES ARE CUTE

and tasty and preserved> TK U MLJ LV NV

Yes!

DG

Thanks for sharing on Lit.


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Sweet and romantic. 5 stars.

Thank You

Thank you for sharing this Storie with me/us. I loved this Storie.

Great story

Thanks for sharing DG.

Sweet Story!

I really liked this story. It was very sweet and I thought it was written well. Great Job!

"Needless to say"

This author uses the phrase "needless to say" frequently - most of the time it doesn't fit.

Other than that, this is a cute little story.

Bill1104

LOL "Needless to say"

It is a great read -

And a great lesson in growing up -

You CANNOT use someone's past to mistreat them - especially when you have the same past. Maturity happens you cannot rush it. You can see why maturity is needed and work on it though.

He learned by communicating after he paid for not doing it -

thank you

even if it was fate that brought them together, they both knew it was right.

Great 5-Star Story

First, the story was excellent. Truly a 5-Star worth story.
Now, I am not trying to pick on you, because a lot of writers here on Literotica make the same mistake you do. Writers seem to be unaware of when to use 'most' and when to use 'almost'. You DO NOT go to Indiana 'most' every weekend. That is grammatically incorrect. You go to Indiana 'almost' every weekend. Or you could have written that you went to Indiana on most weekends. Just omit the word 'every'. Really this isn't much to complain about. But so many writers make the same mistake.

Another great little story

of love lost and found...when will men get their heads from up their asses...