All Comments on 'Ghosts'

I thought this poem was full of emotion,

raw, to the point, but explained a lot.

The only line I really didn't like was:

I was clueless,

despite a precipitous trail of hints

trampled over,

and left to writhe in obscurity.

I thought the words precipitous,

and obscurity were too much for those

lines, and something a little more simplier

could have been used. Overall, it was a great

poem, well done guys.