All Comments on 'Nicoletta Ch. 09'

You know how some stories are worth the wait?... this one wasn't one of those.

to see more included in this posting. It has been a long wait and this chapter didnt help the momentum. I enjoy your writing and hope you post the next chapter sooner rather than later, or at least indicate that you are putting this series on hold.

thats not true i really like it, please continue, i find it to be well written and i love nicoletta

finally she knows she loves him

I don't thinks that Nicolletta loves him yet but she believes he is the only one who cares for her saftey.

Well done..... can't wait for the next chapter.

it was way too short. I hope u don't keep us waiting too long again! 5*s :)

I am glad you are back, dance to your own tune. I understand writers block and I do not find Nicoletta whiny or weak.Update this story at your pleasure. Thank you Bain

Thanks, and post when you can. We appreciate your series!

I loved it. Please update soon.

I can't put more stars than five darn it!

As per usual; folks realize what they really want when it is gone. So true the adage, "you only miss the water when the well runs dry".

Nicoletta better recognize and act like she got sense...good sense!!!!

either at it's best or worst... I can't say. I knew this was where the story was going and Alessandro is the lesser of two evils but she should have a choice. Let her live on her own and then come back and choose him. Maybe I would be able to accept that. But falling in love with her captor is still... distasteful.

Yes! I have been waiting patiently for more....and I GOT IT! LOVE IT...MORE!!! I NEED MORE :)

I think that Alessandro handled her badly in the beginning, but they are meant to be together. Azazel should never have been considered as a mate to Donata. If the family had not been so greedy for higher status, this devil wouldn't be in a position to hurt them all now.

We miss you!

it could have been better

Please update soon! I really really want to know what happens next.

I love this story and have been a dutiful fan since the first installment of Nicoletta, but i think its time for an update i know that this is pleasure writing but it's almost been a year please put us out of our miseries and post another installment.

Please finish this story! The wait is killing me...... I really wanna know what

happens to Nicolette and Alessandro's relationship! AHHHH haha

Your story is AMAZING. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue this!

Your story is making me angry. You are a fantastic writer but I am so sick of female characters falling all over the place for men. Particularly Rich, possessive, and controlling men.

This one in particular is a rapist!

There is no real difference between Azazel and Alessandro in terms of behavior or even values. These characters are throwing lives around and destroying them without remorse or consequence, making it really hard to find any of them a hero. Even Nicolette doesn't. give a second thought to the two people that were taken away because of her.

If Alessandro is going to become a true hero worthy of a romantic fantasy then he needs to suffer for his crimes and he needs to let go of his control. Nicolette must choose to be with him because of something good and redeeming that he does. Going along just because he says so seems weak. and with her fiery spirit that is not who she is.She will continue fighting him until he lets her go.

That said, I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing it. You are a strong writer with strong characters and I think this could turn into something great, something beyond just for Literotica. Best of luck.

but exactly what I needed to hear ... thank you anonymous ... there will be more to follow, much of the 'weakness' shall be remedied, from all involved ... well perhaps not Azazel, but ahh ... well we will just see what I say ...

Jj.

loved it although i would like to see nicoletta continue to hold on to her strong will

Loving it .

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

I love this story you keep writing the way you feel it should go ignore the moron and do what you see fit I can't wait to read some more please don't keep us waiting to long xxx

I read all of this in one sitting. I absolutely love it. I hope that you will give us another chapter soon.

Is there a published book I can purchase so I can get the rest of this story? I would sooo buy it! I need to know what happens!!!!

I hope there is more...

Really need to know what happens next.