All Comments on 'Hidden Tension'

by dirty_lover

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jengx4jengx4about 12 years ago

Very well written. It is always good to hear how a man think about a woman sometimes. If I knew someone felt that way about me, I would never let him go and I would fuck the hell out of him every chance I had.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

More More MORE! Tell me about before, when they had time together. Tell me about later when he was alone in bed. I love seeing into a guy's mind! This was exquisite! MORE!

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 12 years ago
A tenderly poignant wee piece.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wow

I was reading and im astounded..I had a similar experience. And I miss her so much

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
incomplete

Some backstory and an explanation as to why both parties did not follow through on what was obviously mutual attraction and implied consent would have kept this story from being consigned to the trash bin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Familiar

This was like reading my own thoughts from outside my mind. The story was incredible, it continues to remind me of a familiar situation. You write short stories with passion. You either had this feeling, or could be a magnificent con-man.

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