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I liked it, especially the forced anal part. YEP. Best part
Another great one!
Susan, You've done it again! Thanks for another hot story!
Another winner, my friend
You promised and delivered. Good job.
SJP you are a wordsmith extraordinaire!
I would list this as my favorite story but the problem is I haven't read all of your stories yet, I think that you have so much talent in your ability to draw your readers into your stories and make them believable! I realize that so often the best stories that people tell come from their personal life experience and I wonder how much of this is involved in the stories that you tell. I'll be reading the rest of your stories and promise that I will always make a comment because you pointed out that this is the only reward that you receive.
Good Job.
I think you took the story to a good conclusion. I was afraid for awhile it was going to have a much darker ending. You are very good at building the suspense.
I cannot believe
...that this story hasn't received much higher ratings. Perhaps my own personal history biases me to some extent, but I so much enjoyed your wonderful and most surprising ending. Well written. I will read more of your work.
Romance?
She will gain the world and lose everything worth having in the end. She is all about me, me, me.........
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