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by Anonymous

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by le8mebee02/09/12

you are back...

sad and haunting...
Its good...
*L*

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by geemeedee02/09/12

Nice buildup.

So melancholy. You pack a lot into a little space. Nicely done.

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by secretsides02/09/12

What a mind flip! so sweet and gentle then screaching brakes!

Great read! Thx

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by lonesomedove6602/10/12

Why couldn't he be kind

That was short, intense, sweet and sad a very well written story

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by Anonymous02/20/12

Nice

Now that's a twist!

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by DawnJ01/21/13

Quite the twist!

A well-told, riveting, poignant tale! I almost -- almost, but not quite -- feel sorry for the narrator!

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