Rose, For My Daddy

It was going along great. Then boom just a list of acts???? Did you get bored with your own story????

BY WAY OF EXPLANATION

As a writer, I'm never too bored with my story to cut it short. However, I thought the contest had one more day than it did. When I went to copy the text from the contest rules, I realized I only had 5 hours to write a short story. I thought; "no problem." But, alas, as sometimes happens, the story took off and became more than I could finish.

I'll do what I can to finish properly in the coming weeks. But my schedule is really tough this time of year. Thanks for reading...

Actually...

I love the tongue-in-cheek nature of this story. And as for the ultra-abbreviated threesome, well, surprisingly it does really work very well. I was so worked up by that point that those few words were all that was needed for my imagination to fill in the rest. 5 stars.

well

I normally like more detail, but I understand deadlines. It was still a great read. I would love to read an updated version. Good luck in the contest, I gave you a five.

Details

This Really needed more details. It just seems very unfinished. Also, it was so obvious that the person that Rosie blew was her own father.

Great story

Great story, but could have had a little more detail, dads blowjob, eating eachothers pussy,and such.

Good stuff

I think I have found, yet again, another writer here on Lit that I must regularly check on for new stories!