"I see you setting there across the table beside your husband and I am setting here"? We have setting hens. People set the table. Writers set the scene. People are never found setting in a chair. I could go on, but why bother?
This would have been perfect as an audio submission. I can imagine you saying it to me, slowly with lots of sighs and soft moans. I'd listen to that all day.
Why is he stareing at me? Are my tits falling out of my shirt? Do I have a zit on my face? Maybe he's just daydreaming. Fuck! This is really creeping me out. As soon as this dinner is over my husband will take me home, there we can make sweet love all night long. I need to get out of here.
If only we could know what his wife is think at that moment. The generalities would be along these lines 'Oh there goes the fucker eye balling an other woman AGAIN tonight. Every one of my friends have told me how they can't stand him and his wondering eyes. The men barely put up with him. When is that process server going to get here with the divorce papers. WHEN IS HE GOING TO GET RID OF THAT MULLET! When I am free of this loser I can final find somebody worth while!"
"Why can't I be the second woman in a HDK or SS06 story, you know the super sex one that catches the guy on the rebound, WHY?"
The wife is thinking: "What is that ugly little man staring at? is he drooling? Does his eye really point in another direction to the other eye? I can only feel sympathy for his poor wife, she looks so unhappy, she must be a saint for putting up with a living with such a hideous creature. Does he really think that look is turning me on? does he really think I am going to go home and dream of him making love to me? No my husband is plenty enough for me, I might dream about Brad pitt or George Clooney, or who knows maybe that man from the X-men Hugh somebody? but if this 'man' thinks for one second I am going to get turned on thinking about a male pig like him? he has got another thing coming. Oh that is my husband touching me between my legs, while he chats to the pigs wife, wow that's hot, he is going to get so fucked tonight, seeing his handsome face above me and watching my husbands huge cock enter me always turns me on. A pig like this man across from me doesn't even come close. An ddoesn't stand a chance."
someone needs to run out back by the dumpster and jerk off. The poor woman should sit on the other side of the table so he can fantasize about he husband too.
I though the story was very sad, to want a woman that much
I would hope that he would get his shit together, and find a time that they could be together and for him tell her how he feels about her.
Ask her out, and tell her he was going to try and seduce her, because he thinks she is the perfect woman.
A least he'd know where he stands with her, and perhaps she feels the same way about him and is afraid to tell him.
It would be sweet for the two of them to have a sexual affair. A secret sexual tryst just between themselves, would give them something to look forward to getting together.
Seems to me the author is getting a lot of unwarranted critcism.
I thought it was a nicely crafted bit of fantasy with the best audio I've ever heard on Literotica.
I don't understand why some people are so rude in their comments? We all have desires and fantasies, we might not like other's, but I don't think that we as readers and listeners should be so harsh ... then just keep searching for a story that will fit your likings : ) Peace & Love from the Mermaid
Slydog, pay no attention to the rude jealous comments that have been made by rude jealous people! This audio is one about the thoughts that everyone has in their mind and you did it VERY WELL! Keep it up Baby! ;) xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Setting?
"I see you setting there across the table beside your husband and I am setting here"? We have setting hens. People set the table. Writers set the scene. People are never found setting in a chair. I could go on, but why bother?
Audio
This would have been perfect as an audio submission. I can imagine you saying it to me, slowly with lots of sighs and soft moans. I'd listen to that all day.
You know what she is really thinking? I do.
Why is he stareing at me? Are my tits falling out of my shirt? Do I have a zit on my face? Maybe he's just daydreaming. Fuck! This is really creeping me out. As soon as this dinner is over my husband will take me home, there we can make sweet love all night long. I need to get out of here.
If only
If only we could know what his wife is think at that moment. The generalities would be along these lines 'Oh there goes the fucker eye balling an other woman AGAIN tonight. Every one of my friends have told me how they can't stand him and his wondering eyes. The men barely put up with him. When is that process server going to get here with the divorce papers. WHEN IS HE GOING TO GET RID OF THAT MULLET! When I am free of this loser I can final find somebody worth while!"
"Why can't I be the second woman in a HDK or SS06 story, you know the super sex one that catches the guy on the rebound, WHY?"
The wife is thinking: "What is that ugly little man staring at? is he drooling? Does his eye really point in another direction to the other eye? I can only feel sympathy for his poor wife, she looks so unhappy, she must be a saint for putting up with a living with such a hideous creature. Does he really think that look is turning me on? does he really think I am going to go home and dream of him making love to me? No my husband is plenty enough for me, I might dream about Brad pitt or George Clooney, or who knows maybe that man from the X-men Hugh somebody? but if this 'man' thinks for one second I am going to get turned on thinking about a male pig like him? he has got another thing coming. Oh that is my husband touching me between my legs, while he chats to the pigs wife, wow that's hot, he is going to get so fucked tonight, seeing his handsome face above me and watching my husbands huge cock enter me always turns me on. A pig like this man across from me doesn't even come close. An ddoesn't stand a chance."
WOW
someone needs to run out back by the dumpster and jerk off. The poor woman should sit on the other side of the table so he can fantasize about he husband too.
Get your fucking head down, slydog. Incoming!
Gotta say you have it coming dude!
I though the story was very sad, to want a woman that much
I would hope that he would get his shit together, and find a time that they could be together and for him tell her how he feels about her.
Ask her out, and tell her he was going to try and seduce her, because he thinks she is the perfect woman.
A least he'd know where he stands with her, and perhaps she feels the same way about him and is afraid to tell him.
It would be sweet for the two of them to have a sexual affair. A secret sexual tryst just between themselves, would give them something to look forward to getting together.
Thanks for the read
Dare I say it?
Seems to me the author is getting a lot of unwarranted critcism.
I thought it was a nicely crafted bit of fantasy with the best audio I've ever heard on Literotica.
I Enjoyed The Story
I don't understand why some people are so rude in their comments? We all have desires and fantasies, we might not like other's, but I don't think that we as readers and listeners should be so harsh ... then just keep searching for a story that will fit your likings : ) Peace & Love from the Mermaid
VERY WELL DONE
Slydog, pay no attention to the rude jealous comments that have been made by rude jealous people! This audio is one about the thoughts that everyone has in their mind and you did it VERY WELL! Keep it up Baby! ;) xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Excellent
I love your voice. This was so hot. Well done. Very nice pace, very erotic. Loved it.
So true
Those who judge this submission have never been in a passionless marriage.
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