Not the Woman he Knew

Glad you're back!

Great short story. I've missed your contributions for over a year. I look forward to more from you (soon, I hope).

Well done

No sex...no problem. This is just plain good story telling. Thanks, and please keep it up, sooner rather than later. I gave you a 5, only because there's no 6.

about time

you jump started your writing career again. Been waiting long enough. I have read all of your stories twice some more than that.loved them all.,674e

The Woman

Loved your story. Hope more will come. Thanks.

great story

Well done.

Loved it!

I'm a sucker for a good love story - and this is one of the best!

WELCOME BACK!!!!

You have been off the radar for some time, although I did see you have something a year or so ago.

Jake Rivers is never seen anymore, TelephoneMan I believe has fallen ill, and the rest of the greats are seldom seen anymore. The Pacific Northwest welcomes you once again. I enjoyed the story very much.

Sincerely, Prof. Ramstein

Great little story

Glad to see another delightful little romance from you. I hope to see more from you soon.

Boyd

Welcome Back

Welcome back, you have been missed. Keep up the good stories!

Not enough

Over time, your stories have gotten less and less detailed, and more choppy. It's like reading an outline of what would be a really good story if fleshed out. Your plots are very good, but there are generally only one or two complete scenes in them, with the rest being hints at what the scene should actually be. In this one, the only really complete scene was the shootout, and even that could've been more detailed.

Great Story

You are one of my favorite authors. Nice background.

What a charming, exciting and well written story!

Loved your writing style Dinsmore...had a warm endearing quality and a gentle rhythm that was a pleasure to read. Further, loved the economy of style. E. B. White would be proud!

Love your work

I have enjoyed your storytelling for years. Delighted your back

A perfect simple ending to a delightful story!

Thank you!
M1

These Recent Stories...

Are ones I started years ago and could never finish. My editor died suddenly, other aspects of life became more important and sitting in a chair all day writing is not healthy.
I also lost a quarter of a million words in a backup crash---that will not happen again.
In any event, losing my beloved editor, losing all those partial stories, realizing that sitting was literally killing me and rescuing three special dogs...I'm not sure I've got the time or patience to live tied to a lap top again for months on end.
Thank you to those who have appreciated my efforts. For those who nit pick..fuck off.

Welcome Back

Glad to hear you are still active with dog rescue.
Good little story.

Love this writer

Your work has moved and inspired me for years. Glad to see new material from you. This is another one of your great tales.

YOU'RE BACK - IT'S WONDERFUL!!!!

I had quit looking for new stuff from you. Thanks be to the muse, or whatever put the burr under your saddle (o butt?)!!

I like it so much that I'm crying; THX

I could see it coming from their interaction when she was drunk at the party; but it was such a lovely heart-warming tale

Thx;
DKP

Very good read

Interesting and entertaining. One of your better stories. Thanks.

Very linear - not simple -

But the complexity flowed pretty well - and the ending was where it should have been. The trip was fun too. It is fun getting to shoot a bad guy -

an entertaining story

well done
thank you

Good Story

Only problem I had with it, the ending was somewhat abrupt.