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by Anonymous02/12/12

annoying

I could not read past the fourth paragraph. The writing style leaves much to be desired. " he sits back and smiles" What are those descriptors for? The story idea sounded great. please try again .

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by Anonymous02/12/12

Good start

Many young men desire older woman near by. Most women ignore the signs but some tease and enjoy the attention. A few take the next step, it can be rewarding

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by Anonymous02/12/12

always another time

Well I trust Ethan will enjoy Gracelyn for real in the next chapter. She just want to coach a 'virgin'......... maybe you should devleop Ethan's 'game'.

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